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Do you agree or disagree? Working at home using computer and telephone is better than working in an office.

Working at home using computer and telephone is better than working in an office. 15bpG

To be honest, I always regard office as a place that keeps people within bounds. Compared to the office, working at home seems much more comfortable. Neither need you to work in cubicle nor waste unnecessarily time on the way to work. Therefore, from my perspective, working at home definitely outweighs working in office. First of all, working at homes saves you much of time on the way and keeps you away from the aggravation of the morning and evening traffic. Take myself as an example. In order to get office on time, I have to get up 6 o'clock in the morning so that I am able to catch the. . .

To be honest, I always regard office as a place that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 within bounds. Compared to the office, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at home seems much more comfortable. Neither need you to work in cubicle nor waste unnecessarily
 time on the way to work. Therefore
, from my perspective, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at home definitely outweighs You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 in office.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbusyengagedaliverunningemployedfunctioning
working
 at homes saves you much of time on the way and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 you away from the aggravation of the morning and evening traffic. Take myself as an example. In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 office on time, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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get
 up 6 o'clock in the morning This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I am able to catch Did you forget something after 'the'?
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