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In today’s world, rather than the government, private companies conduct and pay for most scientific research. What are the advantages and disadvantages of researches by private bodies?

In today’s world, rather than the government, private companies conduct and pay for most scientific research. What are the advantages and disadvantages of researches by private bodies? K3DbR
In this contemporary era, most of the scientific analysis is done by private companies more than the government. There are some compelling benefits as well as potential drawbacks too of having privatisation in scientific research. In commencement, one of the most superior advantages is a financial benefit. To illustrate, individual agencies do not have investment limits, they spend money, which is required for exploration, in fact, more than requirements, as if they found handsome profit, definitely they invest high amount of money than the authority. In addition, they also provide manforce, which is also an important factor for any analysis. Moreover, quality also a major factor for any product, that is why personal corporations also check it, since they need to earn profit from any particular investigation, and without high quality product cannot help to earn profit. Therefore, they check enhancement of product. Thus, privatisation in any scientific exploration could be beneficial. However, technical exploration by personal agencies could be hazardous for any country. To demonstrate, there are some technological researches, which can be only done by the government. For example, nuclear investigations, if private company involve in this type of exploration, it could be harmful for any nation, because private company need handsome profit. Hence, they can easily share these important documents to any third party company or other nation, which would be threatened. Apart from that, personal company can also shut down some important research. In simple words, if company does not earn any profit, surely they closed that investigations whether it is important or not. Thus, involvement of private corporation could be a major threat for any country. In conclusion, although involvement of personal practices in technical investigations are beneficial not for financial requirements only but also help to enhance quality of products, cons also should be addressed such as sharing of documents for money as well as closed down of any important research.
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is done
by
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more than the
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some
compelling benefits
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as potential drawbacks too of having
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privatisation
in scientific research.

In commencement, one of the most superior advantages is a financial benefit. To illustrate, individual agencies do not have investment limits, they spend money, which
is required
for
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exploration
, in fact, more than requirements, as if they found handsome
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profit
, definitely they invest high amount of money than the authority.
In addition
, they
also
provide
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manforce
, which is
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important
factor for any analysis.
Moreover
, quality
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a major factor for any
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product
,
that is
why
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personal
corporations
also
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check
it, since they need to earn
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profit
from any particular
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investigation
, and without high quality
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product
cannot
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help
to earn
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profit
.
Therefore
, they
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check
enhancement of
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product
.
Thus
,
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privatisation
in any scientific
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exploration
could be beneficial.

However
, technical
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exploration
by
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personal
agencies could be hazardous for any country. To demonstrate, there are
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some
technological researches, which can be
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only
done by the
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government
.
For example
, nuclear
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investigations
, if
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private
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company
involve in this type of
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exploration
, it could be harmful for any nation,
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because
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private
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company
need handsome
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profit
.
Hence
, they can
easily
share these
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important
documents to any third party
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company
or other nation, which would
be threatened
. Apart from that,
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personal
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company
can
also
shut down
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some
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important
research. In simple words, if
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company
does not earn any
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profit
,
surely
they closed that
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investigations
whether it is
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important
or not.
Thus
, involvement of
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private
corporation could be a major threat for any country.

In conclusion
, although involvement of
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personal
practices in technical
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investigations
are beneficial not for financial requirements
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also
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help
to enhance quality of
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products
, cons
also
should
be addressed
such as sharing of documents for money
as well
as closed down of any
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important
research.
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IELTS essay In today’s world, rather than the government, private companies conduct and pay for most scientific research. What are the advantages and disadvantages of researches by private bodies?

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