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In today society more and more work is done by machines. Do you think the positive effects of these development ougwight the negative effects of individuals and society .

With advancement of technology, the utilized of machine become increased. Some people reckon that Increasing use of machines has positive effects on people as well as society while others think it has negative effects. I believe that it's has negative effects on society and people but I also believe that it's has some positive effect also. I will discuss my view points in the subsequent paragraphs.

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