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House is basic necessity. Government should provide free housing to poor people. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed that having a home or a place to live is basic right of an individual. It is the duty of government to ensure a home to everyone. However, I partially agree to the statement as giving home will benefit people which government should do so, but there should be a minimum charges that everyone should afford to pay. To begin with, I would like to say that house is indispensable thing and it ensure safety and comfortable feeling. Along with it, House is shelter and protect people from extreme weather conditions such as storm, rain, etc. Moreover, Home is a place where person feel relaxed with family after coming back to home from work, all this are advantages of having own's home; therefore government should provide home to every person. In addition to this, giving houses to people will improve living conditions and status of the country. Although, government should provide home, but there should be minimum price for everyone to pay. The land and construction material costs a lot and government need support from people in order to cover up the expenses. For example, Many state government will be in debt without support from the population of the country. Apart from it, The government should try to make Houses cheaper as compared to market price. By keeping the above facts in mind, The conclusion is that government should give free houses to everyone but there should be small price for poor people in order to acess the home.
It
is believed
that having a home or a place to
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live
is basic right of an individual. It is the duty of
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government
to ensure a home to
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everyone
.
However
, I
partially
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agree
to the statement as giving home will benefit
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people
which
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government
should do
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so
,
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but
there should be a minimum charges that
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everyone
should afford to pay. To
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begin
with, I would like to say that
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house
is indispensable thing and it ensure safety and comfortable feeling. Along with it,
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House
is shelter and protect
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people
from extreme weather conditions such as storm, rain, etc.
Moreover
, Home is a place where person feel relaxed with family after coming back to home from work, all this are advantages of having
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own
's home;
therefore
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government
should provide home to every person.
In addition
to this, giving
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houses
to
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people
will
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improve
living conditions and status of the country. Although,
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government
should provide home,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there should be minimum price for
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everyone
to pay. The land and construction material costs a lot and
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government
need support from
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people
in order to cover up the expenses.
For example
,
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Many
state
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government
will be in debt without support from the population of the country. Apart from it, The
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government
should try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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Houses
cheaper as compared to market price.

By keeping the above facts in mind, The conclusion is that
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government
should give free
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houses
to
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everyone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there should be
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small
price for poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in order to acess the home.
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IELTS essay House is basic necessity. Government should provide free housing to poor people.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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