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2. There is an increasing trend for people to live alone. What is causing this to happen? Will it have a negative or a positive impact on the society?

The extraordinary rise of living alone is among the most significant social trends of the modern world. Living alone is ubiquitous in developed, open societies, and this particularly affects health and health care. In my opinion, experiencing one has a negative impact on society. One possibility is that there is a causal link between living alone, being socially isolated, and feeling lonely. But these are three distinct conditions, and living alone does not necessarily mean experiencing one or both of the others (being isolated or feeling lonely). Overall, the main cause of living alone is the tendency of life, nowadays, people do not get married any more than before. Secondly, individuals often spend more time studying and working, especially in civic. Research shows that Americans who are working as journalists, scholars, health care providers, and business persons usually conflate living alone, feeling lonely, and being isolated, and the result is widespread confusion about each condition. In more detail, living alone is the consequence of isolation because of physical frailty as well as deaths in their family and friendship networks. Thus, they have smaller social networks and less stable contact with children, and they face heightened risks of isolation if they divorce or become widowers. The risks of social isolation depend not only on which kind of people, but also on the place people are living. Poor neighborhoods with a robust social infrastructure, busy sidewalks, and these social infrastructures suffered higher mortality rates. At these points, most policy recommendations for reducing living alone are essential. As the population ages and the number of people aging alone grows, societies throughout the world will need to develop new supportive housing programs and new forms of elderly care.
The extraordinary rise of
living
alone
is among the most significant
social
trends of the modern world.
Living
alone
is ubiquitous in developed, open societies, and this
particularly
affects health and health care. In my opinion, experiencing one has a
negative
impact on society.

One possibility is that there is a causal link between
living
alone
, being
socially
isolated, and feeling lonely.
But
these are three distinct conditions, and
living
alone
does not
necessarily
mean experiencing one or both of the others (
being isolated
or feeling lonely).
Overall
, the main cause of
living
alone
is the tendency of life, nowadays,
people
do not
get
married any more than
before
.
Secondly
, individuals
often
spend more time studying and working,
especially
in civic. Research
shows
that Americans who are working as journalists, scholars, health care providers, and business persons
usually
conflate
living
alone
, feeling lonely, and
being isolated
, and the result is widespread confusion about each condition.

In more detail,
living
alone
is the consequence of isolation
because
of physical frailty
as well
as deaths in their family and friendship networks.
Thus
, they have smaller
social
networks and less stable contact with children, and they face heightened
risks
of isolation if they divorce or become widowers.

The
risks
of
social
isolation depend not
only
on which kind of
people
,
but
also
on the place
people
are
living
. Poor neighborhoods with a robust
social
infrastructure, busy sidewalks, and these
social
infrastructures suffered higher mortality rates.

At these points, most policy recommendations for reducing
living
alone
are essential. As the population ages and the number of
people
aging
alone
grows, societies throughout the world will need to develop new supportive housing programs and new forms of elderly care.
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IELTS essay 2. There is an increasing trend for people to live alone. What is causing this to happen? Will it have a negative or a positive impact on the society?

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284 words
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