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In this present era, students have various options for learning or gaining knowledge.

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In this present era, students have various options for learning or gaining knowledge. Few people feel that reading stories from a book is valuable than watching TV or computer games for students. This essay will enshrine my agreement and the reasons for it is explained in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, plenty of beneficial things of reading, which helps to develop students. To begin with, reading books is to enhance the memory power of students, which will help to increase their academic result. In addition, if students read novels than their vocabulary range will become larger. For example, 70% of toppers students in India have a habit of reading a book it was described in one survey which was conducted by the University of Gujarat in 2017. These two are the main benefits of reading. On the same hand, watching the screen of TV and computer creates problems to children. Firstly, looking more time at visual screen damage the ability to see at an early age. Secondly, if students play computer game then they become addicted to that, which will create a negative impact on the academic result. For instance, during the pandemic time student started playing computer games and watching TV shows, which generated a negative effect on their result. To conclude, although playing games on the computer and watching TV have side effects, reading is more useful than computer and TV, which improve student memory power and vocabulary too. in my opinion, I strongly feel that reading books is the best for teenagers and adults because of its advantages.
In this present era,
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students
have various options for learning or gaining knowledge. Few
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people
feel that
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reading
stories from a
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book
is
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valuable
than watching TV or computer
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games
for
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students
. This essay will enshrine my agreement and the reasons for it is
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explained
in the following paragraphs.

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plenty
of beneficial things of
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reading
, which
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helps
to develop
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students
. To
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begin
with,
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reading
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books
is to enhance the memory power of
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students
, which will
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help
to increase their academic result.
In addition
, if
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students
read novels than their vocabulary range will become larger.
For example
, 70% of toppers
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students
in India have a habit of
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reading
a
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book
it was
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described
in one survey which
was conducted
by the University of Gujarat in 2017. These two are the main benefits of reading.

On the same hand, watching the screen of TV and computer creates problems to children.
Firstly
, looking more time at visual screen damage the ability to
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see
at an early age.
Secondly
, if
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students
play computer game then they become addicted to that, which will create a
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negative
impact on the academic result.
For instance
, during the pandemic time
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student
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started
playing computer
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games
and watching TV
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shows
, which generated a
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negative
effect on their result.

To conclude
, although playing
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games
on the computer and watching TV have side effects,
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reading
is more useful than computer and TV, which
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improve
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student
memory power and vocabulary too.
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in
my opinion, I
strongly
feel that
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reading
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books
is the best for
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teenagers
and adults
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because
of its advantages.
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IELTS essay In this present era, students have various options for learning or gaining knowledge.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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