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In this modern ear, trains are main source for for transportation.

In this modern ear, trains are main source for for transportation. KGPmw

In this modern ear, trains are main source for for transportation. Some states that country should invest more in the roads other than railways. I truly disagree with the statement given above cause of following factors. First and foremost reason of it is that the railways cannot reach to the Corners of the country. Therefore a particular person have to move from his place to the railway station in order to get the service. As a result it may consume more of the customers time. For example, if an individual lives in a remote area and wishes to travel he or she cannot obtain the service because less availability. On the other hand this particular transportation mode cannot be used in emergency situations. Most of the emergency situation police, hospitals and fire stations use road transportation rather than railways. For instant, in the survey of Canada it was resulted that 97 percentage road was used in bad conditions. In conclusion, roads often commonly used by the police and are more available then railways.

In this modern ear, trains are main source Possible typo: you repeated a wordfor
for for
 transportation. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 states that country should invest more in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 other than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
. I truly
 disagree with the statement This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 above cause of following factors.

First
 and foremost reason of it is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 cannot reach to the Corners of the country. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 a particular person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 from his place to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
 station in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the service. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result it may consume more of the customers time. For example
, if an individual This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in a remote area and wishes to travel he or she cannot obtain the service This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 less availability.

On the other hand
 this particular transportation mode cannot be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in emergency situations. Most of the emergency situation police, hospitals and fire stations This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 transportation rather
 than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
. For instant, in the survey of Canada it was resulted
 that 97 percentage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 conditions.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
commonly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by the police and are more available Did you mean "than"?than
then
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
. 