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In this contemporary era people do not like to read about past days so the hostory is totally lossing its value do you agree or disagree

In this contemporary era people do not like to read about past days so the hostory is totally lossing its value 0EAx5
Irrefutably, in this contemporary era, people are going with western culture. Therefore, it is believed that due to the fact of reduction of masses interest from history history it has losted its identity. While now a days people do not like history, there are multifarious people who like to enjoy historical events. To commence, behind the justifications why history doesnt lost its value as in paramount status people like to walk with their tradtional rule and rugulation and they only wearing the dresses of their tradition as a result of this they feel a connection with their customes and for example India is a nation where not merely various kind of cultur people but also different type of languages masses are living and they are celebreating their all festivals. Clearly, the range of past day rules cannot lost its space owing to the fact of their love regarding yeaster years. Another cordinal factor is that, individuals perfer to gather their objects and keep save them for upcoming generation resultantly they would take their intention toward learing historical thongs. Moving fruther, peolpe are more and more visting now in the light of the fact that they want to know more about their past people. For example, there are multiple museumes wich are running by government and aslo spending lot amount of revenue on the caring of these. Which may not merely enchance the interest of inndividals towards learning about yester life standard but also boosting administration income. It leads development in countries. Nevethless, with the advancement in technology people are forgetting past dsys activities intead spending time with people they are wasting it on electronical tool and they also feel boor when they read history. To sum up, council is giving care to places which are associated with yester years because of this the interest of people regarding history is increasing. However, there are many floks who are accepting other culture as they opine that their cuture is outstanding now.
Irrefutably
, in this contemporary era,
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people
are going with western culture.
Therefore
, it
is believed
that due to the fact of reduction of masses interest from
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history
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history
it has
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losted
its identity. While
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now a days
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people
do not like
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history
, there are multifarious
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people
who like to enjoy historical
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events
.

To commence, behind the justifications why
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history
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doesnt
lost its value as in paramount status
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people
like to walk with their
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tradtional
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rule
and
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rugulation and
they
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only
wearing the dresses of their tradition
as a result
of this they feel a connection with their
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customes
and
for example
India is a nation where not
merely
various kind of
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cultur
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people
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but
also
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different
type of languages masses are
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living and
they are
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celebreating
their all festivals.
Clearly
, the range of past day
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rules
cannot
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lost
its space owing to the fact of their
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love
regarding
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yeaster
years. Another
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cordinal
factor is that, individuals
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perfer
to gather their objects and
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keep
save them for upcoming generation
resultantly
they would take their intention toward
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learing
historical thongs.

Moving
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fruther
,
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peolpe
are more and more
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visting
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now
in the light of the fact that they want to know more about their past
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people
.
For example
, there are multiple
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museumes
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wich
are running by
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government
and
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aslo
spending lot amount of revenue on the caring of these. Which may not
merely
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enchance
the interest of
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inndividals
towards learning about
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yester
life standard
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but
also
boosting administration income. It leads development in countries.
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Nevethless
, with the advancement in technology
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people
are forgetting past
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dsys
activities
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intead
spending time with
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people
they are wasting it on
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electronical
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tool and
they
also
feel boor when they read
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history
. To sum up, council is giving care to places which
are associated
with
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yester
years
because of this
the interest of
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people
regarding
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history
is increasing.
However
, there are
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many
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floks
who are accepting other culture as they opine that their
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cuture
is outstanding
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now
.
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IELTS essay In this contemporary era people do not like to read about past days so the hostory is totally lossing its value

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  American English
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