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In the weekend you do some activitive

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In the morning, I and my mother go the store to buy baking material, after we research on the google to know how to make a cake. It's kind of fun to do something with my family. After that I take a snap from 1pm to 3pm and then look for my schedule to find out any homeword or any topic I have to prepare for the next lesson. In the evening, I hang out with my boyfriend to hiking in the park and sometime we drive around the city to see the view at night. In the end of the day, I look for some film to watch and then I go to bed at 11pm
In the morning, I and my mother go the store to
buy
baking material, after we research on the
google
to know how to
make
a cake. It's kind of fun to do something with my family. After that I take a snap from 1pm to 3pm and then look for my schedule to find out any
homeword
or any topic I
have to
prepare for the
next
lesson. In the evening, I hang out with my boyfriend to hiking in the park and sometime we drive around the city to
see
the view at night. In the
end
of the day, I look for
some
film to
watch
and then I go to bed at 11pm
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IELTS essay In the weekend you do some activitive

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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