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in the united state employees typically work five days a week for eight hour each day.

in the united state employees typically work five days a week for eight hour each day. m15Ld
Many employees want to work four days a week and are willing less salary. They believe by this offer employees can fell more rest, and as a result, they would make less costly errors also this this the unemployment rate will decrease, in addition they can spend more time with their family which cast doubt by the lecture and I will explore it in my following essay. Firstly, the reading suggests that this offer employee can feel more comfortable, so they will make fewer costly errors, but the lecture adds that the company should spend more money to hire new workers and train them, also the office space should extend and more computers needed, in the result the lecture prove the errors. Secondly, the article says that by this offers the unemployment rate will decrease, in contrast the lecture says that hiring new workers will be costly. The company expectation will increase and they need from their workers to do a five-day job in four days, so this was not correct. Thirdly, employees want less salary and they want to spend more time with family, but the lecture talks that they will lose the advance career or lose the job, also the will not promote. As a result, the offers from reading was cast doubt by the lecture with the above reasons.
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employees
want to work four days a week and are willing less salary. They believe by this
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offer
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employees
can
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fell
more rest, and
as a result
, they would
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make
less costly errors
also
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this this
the unemployment rate will decrease,
in addition
they can spend more time with their family which cast doubt by the
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lecture
and I will explore it in my following essay.

Firstly
, the reading suggests that this
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offer
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employee
can feel more comfortable,
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so
they will
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make
fewer costly errors,
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but
the
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lecture
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adds
that the
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company
should spend more money to hire new workers and train them,
also
the office space should extend and more computers needed, in the result the
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lecture
prove the errors.

Secondly
, the article says that by
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this
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offers
the unemployment rate will decrease,
in contrast
the
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lecture
says that hiring new workers will be costly. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
expectation will
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increase and
they need from their workers to do a five-day job in four days,
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so
this was not correct.

Thirdly
,
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employees
want less
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salary and
they want to spend more time with family,
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but
the
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lecture
talks that they will lose the advance career or lose the job,
also
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the
will not promote.

As a result
, the
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offers
from reading
was cast
doubt by the
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lecture
with the above reasons.
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IELTS essay in the united state employees typically work five days a week for eight hour each day.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
222 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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