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TPO 32 integrated strange noises might have three mutually exclusive sources male and female ocra giant squids other submarines

TPO 32 integrated strange noises might have three mutually exclusive sources male and female ocra giant squids other submarines JoYq0

The article asserts that some Russian submarines recorded strange noises and there are different hypotheses about their sources. The teacher completely overthrows all the assumptions mentioned by the author even though she accepts that this phenomenon is debating. In the following, her explanations are discussed thoroughly. First of all, the reading claims that ocra males and females were the main sources of the noise. However, the professor refutes this idea and says this is highly unlikely even though she thinks it is plausible. She insists that these creatures mostly live near sea surface; therefore, the submarines could not hear them, mainly because they were very deep down the ocean, and the sound of those animals could not reach those submarines. Secondly, the passage posits that giant squids (a sea predator) were making those sounds. The lecturer rejects this scenario as she refers that first sounds were recorded during 1960's and disappeared after about twenty years surprisingly. Since giant squids have always lived in the area and never leaved there, it is not acceptable to refer to these animals as the sources of the noises owing to the fact that they could not make the noises only for a certain period. Tertiary, the essay upholds that other countries' submarines were the cause of the noises for they were snicking around the location. Nonetheless, the educator opposes this theory insomuch as she claims that the source moved fast and changed its direction really quickly. Therefore, the sound could not be made by submarines although their engines made some noises and accompanied quackers. Moreover, she acknowledges that those new submarines were constructed by state-of-the-art technologies which enabled them to operate more silently.

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some
 Russian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
 recorded strange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noises
 and there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 hypotheses about their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
sources
. The teacher completely overthrows all the assumptions mentioned by the author even though
 she accepts that this phenomenon is debating. In the following, her explanations are discussed
thoroughly
.

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First of all
, the reading claims that Possible spelling mistake found.OCRokraOraCRAOCHAOCTA
ocra
 males and females were the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
sources
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noise
. However
, the professor refutes this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and says this is highly
 unlikely even though
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 it is plausible. She insists that these creatures mostly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 near sea surface; therefore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
 could not hear them, mainly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 deep down the ocean, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
 of those animals could not reach those submarines.

Secondly
, the passage posits that giant squids (a sea predator) were making those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
. The lecturer rejects this scenario as she refers that first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoisetonevibrationaccentnotemusic
sounds
were recorded
The article is probably missing here: "during the 1960's".during the 1960's
during 1960's
 and disappeared after about twenty years surprisingly
. Since giant squids have always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in the area and never leaved there, it is not acceptable to refer to these animals as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
sources
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noises
 owing to the fact that they could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noises
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for a certain period.

Tertiary, the essay upholds that other countries' You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
 were the cause of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noises
 for they were snicking around the location. Nonetheless, the educator opposes this theory insomuch as she claims that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withorigincauseauthorityexpert
source
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 its direction really
quickly
. Therefore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvigoroussturdysolidvibrantsafethorough
sound
 could not be made
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
 although their engines made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcryexplosionroarcacophonycommotioncrash
noises
 and accompanied Possible spelling mistake found.Quakersquackery
quackers
. Moreover
, she acknowledges that those new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsubmersible
submarines
were constructed
 by state-of-the-art technologies which enabled them to operate more silently
. 