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in the past years when student did a College degree date tended to study in their own country in a modern era, they have a lot of opportunity to study for an

in the past years when student did a College degree date tended to study in their own country in a modern era, they have a lot of opportunity to study for an e3KEJ
some years before, when pupils collage College degree, they tended to learn in their own Nation. in Modern era. They have a lot of opportunity to study abroad. I completely agree with second View because in foreign good quality of education and better facility of transportation and health care system. Numerous advantages of study abroad. first and foremost is that better quality of education and different kind of course is more available in foreign rather than home country. Children can choose their own interest course so children easily understand topic due to better quality of education teacher Well qualified and more teaching experience. Hence, children more preferred to study abroad. for instance, most of Indian students go to study in Canada because Canada provide well education.
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IELTS essay in the past years when student did a College degree date tended to study in their own country in a modern era, they have a lot of opportunity to study for an

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  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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