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In the past the most inhabitants in small village lived

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In the past, the most inhabitiants lived during whole life becouse everybody recognize each other. Living in a small area there were its advantages and disadvantages. I believe there were three benifits. Firstly there were helpfull and friendly inhabitants who lived in a small village becouse they recognised each other and connected every time. They never felt aloneSecondly they lived without modern technology and transports. However, if they asked question and something, They walked to the them and connected each other. Thirdly in the past people spent alot of time in the gardens and fields when grow their fruit and vegetables. However they sold their products another broad when they learnt its cultutes and traditions. In my opinoin it was the best changing culture. Nowadays the most people live in large cities becouse they move other modern cities which is full of quolificaton. They move another country when are used modern transport. Also they use mobile phones, internet and fax which is the fastest way. In my view it is better to live in the large city then the past small community becouse our life is developing very fast.
In the past, the most
inhabitiants
lived
during whole life
becouse
everybody
recognize
each
other
. Living in a
small
area there were its advantages and disadvantages. I believe there were three
benifits
.
Firstly
there were
helpfull
and friendly inhabitants who
lived
in a
small
village
becouse
they
recognised
each
other
and connected every time. They never felt
aloneSecondly
they
lived
without modern technology and transports.
However
, if they asked question and something, They walked to
the them
and connected each
other
.
Thirdly
in the past
people
spent
alot
of time in the gardens and fields when grow their fruit and vegetables.
However
they sold their products another broad when they
learnt
its
cultutes
and traditions. In my
opinoin
it was the best changing culture. Nowadays the most
people
live
in large cities
becouse
they
move
other
modern cities which is full of
quolificaton
. They
move
another country when are
used
modern transport.
Also
they
use
mobile phones, internet and fax which is the fastest way. In my view it is better to
live
in the large city then the past
small
community
becouse
our life is developing
very
fast
.
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IELTS essay In the past the most inhabitants in small village lived

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  American English
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