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In the past the most inhabitants in small village lived

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In the past, the most inhabitiants lived during whole life becouse everybody recognize each other. Living in a small area there were its advantages and disadvantages. I believe there were three benifits. Firstly there were helpfull and friendly inhabitants who lived in a small village becouse they recognised each other and connected every time. They never felt aloneSecondly they lived without modern technology and transports. However, if they asked question and something, They walked to the them and connected each other. Thirdly in the past people spent alot of time in the gardens and fields when grow their fruit and vegetables. However they sold their products another broad when they learnt its cultutes and traditions. In my opinoin it was the best changing culture. Nowadays the most people live in large cities becouse they move other modern cities which is full of quolificaton. They move another country when are used modern transport. Also they use mobile phones, internet and fax which is the fastest way. In my view it is better to live in the large city then the past small community becouse our life is developing very fast.
In the past, the most
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inhabitiants
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lived
during whole life
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becouse
everybody
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recognize
each
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other
. Living in a
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small
area there were its advantages and disadvantages. I believe there were three
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benifits
.
Firstly
there were
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helpfull
and friendly inhabitants who
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lived
in a
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small
village
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becouse
they
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recognised
each
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other
and connected every time. They never felt
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aloneSecondly
they
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lived
without modern technology and transports.
However
, if they asked question and something, They walked to
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the them
and connected each
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other
.
Thirdly
in the past
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people
spent
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alot
of time in the gardens and fields when grow their fruit and vegetables.
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However
they sold their products another broad when they
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learnt
its
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cultutes
and traditions. In my
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opinoin
it was the best changing culture. Nowadays the most
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people
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live
in large cities
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becouse
they
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move
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other
modern cities which is full of
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quolificaton
. They
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move
another country when are
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used
modern transport.
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Also
they
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use
mobile phones, internet and fax which is the fastest way. In my view it is better to
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live
in the large city then the past
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small
community
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becouse
our life is developing
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IELTS essay In the past the most inhabitants in small village lived

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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