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IT IS THOUGHT BY SOMEONE THAT IT IS BETTER TO LIVE IN CITY WHILE OTHER BELIEVE THAT LIFE IS BETTER IN COUNTRYSIDE ... DISCUSS AND GIVE OPINION

IT IS THOUGHT BY SOMEONE THAT IT IS BETTER TO LIVE IN CITY WHILE OTHER BELIEVE THAT LIFE IS BETTER IN COUNTRYSIDE. . . DISCUSS AND GIVE OPINION EdX2q
surroundings are definitely going to affect life of people. There are split opinions about lifestyles in different environments. It is considered by many that spending life in city area is an elite option while another group of thinkers support lifestyle of country side. so both the above mentioned viees will be discussed below along with my opinion and finally conclusion is deduced. To commence with former view, a school of thought suggest to be in city area. Because of many modern facilities are provided which can help to make life easier without hardwork. For instant life, elevator, transportations, are provided which are supposed to be time and energy savior. Furthermore it is easy to meet your needs as there are many shops and shopping centre are available nearby. In nutshell to live busy fast life with smart approch city is appropriate option. on contrary the latter view suggest that countryside life is more peaceful. As it having less pollution and clean atmosphere because of less number of vehicles and factories. To add to this there are splendid natural sights too. For example there can be many waterfalls, forests, farms. such that living in village can lead to slow but pleasent life. To conclude in my opinion, I firmly support the view of spending life in country side. The prime reason for perticular is life with less pollution and healthy natural resources are tend to make your life longer and better. So many considered that busy life of city is choice albeit my arguments prove that countryside life is appropriate way to live healthy life.
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surroundings
are definitely going to affect
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life
of
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people
. There
are split
opinions about lifestyles in
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different
environments. It
is considered
by
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many
that spending
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life
in city area is an elite option while another group of thinkers
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support
lifestyle of country side.
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so
both the above mentioned
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viees
will
be discussed
below along with my opinion and
finally
conclusion
is deduced
.

To commence with former view, a school of
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thought
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suggest to be
in city area.
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Because
of
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many
modern facilities
are provided
which can
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help
to
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make
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life
easier without
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hardwork
. For instant
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life
, elevator, transportations,
are provided
which
are supposed
to be time and energy savior.
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Furthermore
it is easy to
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meet
your needs as there are
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many
shops and shopping
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centre
are available nearby. In nutshell to
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live
busy
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fast
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life
with smart
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approch
city is appropriate option.

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on
contrary the latter view suggest that countryside
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life
is more peaceful. As it having less pollution and clean atmosphere
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because
of less number of vehicles and factories. To
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add
to this there are splendid natural sights too.
For example
there can be
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many
waterfalls, forests, farms.
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such
that living in village can lead to slow
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but
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pleasent
life.

To conclude
in my opinion, I
firmly
support the view of spending
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life
in country side. The prime reason for
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perticular
is
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life
with less pollution and healthy natural resources are
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tend
to
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make
your
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life
longer and better.
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So
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many
considered that busy
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life
of city is choice albeit my arguments prove that countryside
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life
is
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appropriate
way to
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live
healthy
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life
.
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IELTS essay IT IS THOUGHT BY SOMEONE THAT IT IS BETTER TO LIVE IN CITY WHILE OTHER BELIEVE THAT LIFE IS BETTER IN COUNTRYSIDE. . . DISCUSS AND GIVE OPINION

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  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
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