In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend? v.8
In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. v. 8
These days shopping is a common free time activity. In the past, people only went shopping when they needed something from the market. In today's world, some people call it a hobby. I believe, shopping should not be considered a hobby.
When we choose something as our hobby, there must be some social, physical, or intellectual benefits associated with it. For instance, reading a book is good for our mental capacity and knowledge. Playing basketball is an excellent activity for physical fitness. However, shopping as a hobby has no positive effects on an individual.
Shopping daily is simply a waste of resources and energy. When people go shopping every day, they will buy things that are not even needed. We have our closets full of clothes and shoes, on the other side of the world, people are dying for not having enough food and clean water. So in my opinion, people should choose a hobby, that is helpful to others or at least it has some positive outcomes.
Some people would argue that, hobby is something that relaxes an individual mentally and physically. So going to market helps them relax and socializing is the other beneficial factor. It is true, but there are healthier options available for comfort and making connections. For example, going to the library and reading books can give you mental relaxation and you can also socialize. It is a cost effective and a good hobby.
In conclusion, people must choose a hobby that is less expensive and it has some benefits. Shopping as a hobby is financial burden and it has no positive outcomes.
These days
shopping
is a common free time activity. In the past,
people
only
went
shopping
when they needed something from the market. In
today
's world,
some
people
call it a
hobby
. I believe,
shopping
should not
be considered
a hobby.
When we choose something as our
hobby
, there
must
be
some
social, physical, or intellectual benefits associated with it.
For instance
, reading a book is
good
for our mental capacity and knowledge. Playing basketball is an excellent activity for physical fitness.
However
,
shopping
as a
hobby
has no
positive
effects on an individual.
Shopping daily is
simply
a waste of resources and energy. When
people
go
shopping
every day, they will
buy
things that are not even needed. We have our closets full of clothes and shoes, on the other side of the world,
people
are dying for not having
enough
food and clean water.
So
in my opinion,
people
should choose a
hobby
,
that is
helpful to others or at least it has
some
positive
outcomes.
Some
people
would argue that,
hobby
is something that relaxes an individual mentally and
physically
.
So
going to market
helps
them relax and socializing is the other beneficial factor. It is true,
but
there are healthier options available for comfort and making connections.
For example
, going to the library and reading books can give you mental relaxation and you can
also
socialize. It is a cost effective and a
good
hobby.
In conclusion
,
people
must
choose a
hobby
that is
less expensive and it has
some
benefits.
Shopping
as a
hobby
is financial burden and it has no
positive
outcomes.
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