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In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. Is it a negative or positive aspect of development?

In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. Is it a negative or positive aspect of development? 56Brn
In recent years, the development of technology in taking photos has become increasing as well as its impact on human life. Years ago, taken pictures were from objective individuals and places. Nowadays, however, it is plausible to take artificial pics. As the current essay discusses, the possibility of editing photos is a downside of development in this special field. The ability to take unreal photos could be the negative side of development in some cases. In the tourism industry, the cutting-edge cameras, which are generally used for photography, can edit the photos directly or via a computer and build a wrong illustration of a landscape to attract more tourists. While tourists decide to visit a country, edited pictures could be tricky for them when pics are seen in social media, for instance. Another negative side is personal documents, which contain personal photos as evidence. Had personal pics became editable, the identity of individuals would have not recognizable. Therefore, the trend of committing the crimes will increase remarkably. These reasons demonstrate that negative side of development could be dangerous for both individual and society. Having said that, some people may argue that being able to take unreal pictures is the positive side of development in technology. For example, these people can bright and clear old-taken from their old ages, which are valuable to them, by applying the option of editing pictures. Furthermore, the special and family occasions that are held by ordinary people in cities, could be less expensive. These people commonly may fancy pictures from their ceremony. Thereby, instead of pay for the unnecessary stuff to help pics seem more beautiful, they could beautify the pictures by special camera tools. Indeed it is believed that the positive side of development in photography must be considered. It is concluded that there are both negative and positive sides to getting progress in taking photos; however, the negative side is even more powerful than the positive side.
In recent years, the
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development
of technology in taking
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photos
has become increasing
as well
as its impact on human life. Years ago, taken
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pictures
were from objective individuals and places. Nowadays,
however
, it is plausible to take artificial
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pics
. As the
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current
essay discusses, the possibility of editing
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photos
is a downside of
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development
in this special field.

The ability to take unreal
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photos
could be the
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negative
side of
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development
in
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some
cases. In the tourism industry, the cutting-edge cameras, which are
generally
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used
for photography, can edit the
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photos
directly
or via a computer and build a
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wrong
illustration of a landscape to attract more tourists. While tourists decide to visit a country, edited
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pictures
could be tricky for them when
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pics
are
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seen
in social media,
for instance
. Another
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negative
side is personal documents, which contain personal
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photos
as evidence. Had personal
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pics
became editable, the identity of individuals would have not recognizable.
Therefore
, the trend of committing the crimes will increase
remarkably
. These reasons demonstrate that
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negative
side of
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development
could be
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dangerous
for both individual and society.

Having said that,
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some
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people
may argue that being able to take unreal
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pictures
is the
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positive
side of
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development
in technology.
For example
, these
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people
can bright and
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clear
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old
-taken from their
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old
ages, which are valuable to them, by applying the option of editing
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pictures
.
Furthermore
, the special and family occasions that
are held
by ordinary
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people
in cities, could be less expensive. These
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people
commonly
may fancy
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pictures
from their ceremony. Thereby,
instead
of pay for the unnecessary stuff to
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help
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pics
seem more
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beautiful
, they could beautify the
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pictures
by special camera tools.
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Indeed
it
is believed
that the
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positive
side of
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development
in photography
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must
be considered
.

It
is concluded
that there are both
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negative
and
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positive
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sides
to getting progress in taking
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photos
;
however
, the
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negative
side is even more powerful than the
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positive
side.
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IELTS essay In the past, photography was used to real people and places; however, because of technology, today you cannot trust what you see. Is it a negative or positive aspect of development?

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