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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach? v.4

In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach? v. 4
For the time being, it has always been a controversial issue amongst people whether to keep the traditional libraries or replace all of them as boundless development in technology has brought numerous alternatives instead. I highly believe that despite all the available options, sticking to the long-established perspective towards this issue, indicating that having libraries is essential, give the impression of being of the most reliable. Firstly, it is argued that eBooks outweighs the published ones, which needs to be kept in libraries, are harmful to the environment causing more damage in a long term due to the paper consumption. The more paper is used to print books, the more trees need to be cut down. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down since some signed editions are kept in ancient libraries, which needs to be referred to in some cases. Therefore, it is vital that the books are accessible in both printed and electronic types. So that, it is also fair to the people who are not able to read books on their gadgets. Secondly, some believe that through some technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once conveniently. This is a veracious since you can listen to your favoured books during the day; meanwhile you are dealing with your daily life issues. In addition, it enables you to search for any content on all the resources worldwide if you are a premium user. This point of view is accepted at some points; but others, however, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to some crucial problems in all aspects; for instance, killing enthusiasm for research, creativity, and most importantly enhancing some academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism. That is resulted because searchable information, gives you a sophisticated insight of the issue. Furthermore, individuals congregate in a rather scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous. In conclusion, I absolutely disagree that all the libraries have to be shut down. While, as is mentioned above, the proponents of this idea are rightful in some particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
For the time being, it has always been a controversial
issue
amongst
people
whether to
keep
the traditional libraries or replace all of them as boundless development in technology has brought numerous alternatives
instead
. I
highly
believe that despite all the available options, sticking to the long-established perspective towards this
issue
, indicating that having libraries is essential, give the impression of being of the most reliable.

Firstly
, it
is argued
that
eBooks
outweighs the published ones, which needs to be
kept
in libraries, are harmful to the environment causing more damage in a long term due to the paper consumption. The more paper is
used
to print
books
, the more trees need to be
cut
down. While this may be true, we cannot set fire to existing libraries and close them down since
some
signed editions are
kept
in ancient libraries, which needs to
be referred
to in
some
cases.
Therefore
, it is vital that the
books
are accessible in both printed and electronic types.
So
that, it is
also
fair
to the
people
who are not able to read
books
on their gadgets.

Secondly
,
some
believe that through
some
technological advances you are in a position to have access to all sources at once
conveniently
. This is a veracious since you can listen to your
favoured
books
during the day; meanwhile you are dealing with your daily life
issues
.
In addition
, it enables you to search for any content on all the resources worldwide if you are a premium user. This point of view is
accepted
at
some
points;
but
others,
however
, are of the opinion that having access to anything, anytime may lead to
some
crucial problems in all aspects;
for instance
, killing enthusiasm for research, creativity, and most
importantly
enhancing
some
academic erroneous attitudes as plagiarism. That
is resulted
because
searchable information, gives you a sophisticated insight of the
issue
.
Furthermore
, individuals congregate in a
rather
scholastic environment, which does not appear to be disadvantageous.

In conclusion
, I
absolutely
disagree that all the libraries
have to
be shut
down. While, as
is mentioned
above, the proponents of this
idea
are rightful in
some
particular situations, it is impossible to refuse the indispensable role of libraries in the society.
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IELTS essay In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach? v. 4

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371 words
7.5
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