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In the past, lecturers were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this v.2

In the past, lecturers were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. with this v. 2
educational knowledge is gathered from the teaching and learning methods. Gone are the days, when the higher proportion of students were attending the lectures in the universities or colleges. However, at present, tables have turned. Nowadays, it is noticed that many students are concentrating less while attending lectures in universities. Owing to that, the advancement of modern technology has existed from theoretical to the practical structure includes assignment, requirement as well as the content of the study course. To begin with, one of the most convincing reason, I have in this regard that e-commerce learning has provided an opportunity with the online base study. my belief is due to my experience when I had enrolled in the certified long term course in business administration in a reputed university. Apart from this, the various kind of facilities was provided likewise online registration, e-book materials, online access to an e-library of the university etc. As a result, it is affordable to domestic and international student and it becomes easier for students that kills two birds with one stone' s while to maintain the balance between study and work schedule. So, e-learning is a beneficial impact on a student in this modern era. On the other hand, my views are also buoyed in this fact that professors are struggling with their professional career after the wider use of technological learning sources. To elaborate, that we must not ignore the reality that practical knowledge always gains the student' s perception, whereas teaching method is a vital role played in the universities or colleges because students can adapt their general scientific knowledge than online education. For instance, a biological student has to practice in a bio-laboratory which is provided by the university. Generally speaking hitherto, it has been unquestioned accepted by many researchers and academicians that online learning may distract the attention to complete an assignment and it may contain some backlog which affects their career. In a nutshell, many universities have set a goal for a higher level of enrollment in different faculties because lectures have become mandatory for pupils to attend. Although, it brings regular attention and positive results in the academic environment. In this foreseeable future, whether internet sources are useful extremely but giving lectures in the university will not be affected with less margin of educational sector.
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educational
knowledge
is gathered
from the teaching and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
methods. Gone
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "is".
are
the days, when the higher proportion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
were attending the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lectures
in the
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universities
or colleges.
However
, at present, tables have turned. Nowadays, it
is noticed
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are concentrating less while attending
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lectures
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
. Owing to that, the advancement of modern technology has existed from theoretical to the practical structure includes assignment, requirement
as well
as the content of the study course.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, one of the most convincing
Please check whether a plural form of 'reason' should be used.
reason
, I have in this regard that e-commerce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
has provided an opportunity with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
base study.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
my
belief is due to my experience when I had enrolled in the certified long term course in business administration in a reputed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
. Apart from this, the various kind of facilities
was provided
likewise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
registration, e-book materials,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
access to an e-library of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
etc.
As a result
, it is affordable to domestic and international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
and it becomes easier for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
that kills two birds with one
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stone&
#039; s while to maintain the balance between study and work schedule.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, e-learning is a beneficial impact on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
in this modern era.

On the other hand
, my views are
also
buoyed in this fact that professors are struggling with their professional career after the wider
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of technological
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
sources.
Did you mean "Too"?
To
elaborate, that we
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must
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignore
the reality that practical knowledge always gains the
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student&
#039; s perception, whereas teaching method is a vital role played in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
or colleges
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can adapt their general scientific knowledge than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
education.
For instance
, a biological
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
practice in a bio-laboratory which
is provided
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
.
Generally
speaking hitherto, it has
been unquestioned
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
researchers and academicians that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
may distract the attention to complete an assignment and it may contain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
backlog which affects their career.

In a nutshell,
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many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
universities
have set a goal for a higher level of enrollment in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
faculties
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lectures
have become mandatory for pupils to attend. Although, it brings regular attention and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
results in the academic environment. In this foreseeable future, whether internet sources are useful
extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
giving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lectures
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
will not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
with less margin of educational sector.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay In the past, lecturers were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. with this v. 2

Essay
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4 paragraphs
386 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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