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In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum.nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree.

In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent KjbL
It has been considered that technology is progressing at an higher rate such as internet is one of the development in the modern era where information can easily access and it replace the conventional method of knowledge where kept in museum. I disagree with above statement owing to certain reasons which would be discussed in further paragraphs. First and foremost, the one of the prominent reason behind this to provide inaccurate information regarding culture and othet prospects. This is because, introduced of myraid social websites on interent where published by fake people which would be happened riots in between nations whilst save knowldge in museums is best option to grasp the immediately by visually in live. Hence, technology cannot replace the old methods of following the correct information. Moreover, the another reason could be remembered the dates of ancestor by watching live in museums which can not possible to see on social networking sites. To put in another way, social websites. Only represents thethelritically knowledge wherras lively watching in museums. Can. Easily memborize the dates on the spot. Therefore, live stream is best solution to gain knowledge immediately. To conclude,
It has
been considered
that technology is progressing at
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an
higher rate such as internet is one of the development in the modern era where information can
easily
access and it
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replace
the conventional method of knowledge where
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kept
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museum
. I disagree with above statement owing to certain reasons which would
be discussed
in
further
paragraphs.
First
and foremost, the one of the prominent reason behind this to provide inaccurate information regarding culture and
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prospects. This is
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because
, introduced of
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myraid
social websites on
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interent
where published by fake
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people
which would
be happened
riots in between nations whilst save
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knowldge
in
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museums
A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".
is best
option to grasp the immediately by
visually
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
.
Hence
, technology cannot replace the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
methods of following the correct information.
Moreover
, the another reason could
be remembered
the dates of ancestor by watching
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museums
which can not possible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
on social networking sites. To put in another way, social websites.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
represents
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thethelritically
knowledge
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wherras
lively watching in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
museums
. Can.
Easily
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memborize
the dates on the spot.
Therefore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
stream
A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".
is best
solution to gain knowledge immediately.
To conclude
,
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IELTS essay In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent

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