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In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum.nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree.

In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent 0GNG
It has been considered that technology is progressing at a higher rate such as internet is one of the development in the modern era where information can easily access and it replaces the conventional method of knowledge where kept in museum. I disagree with above statement owing to certain reasons which would be discussed in further paragraphs. First and foremost, the one of the prominent reason behind this to provide inaccurate knowledge regarding culture and other prospects. This is due to the fact, introduced of myriad social websites on Internet where published by fake people which make high chances of riots in between nations whilst save knowledge in museums is the best option to grasp immediately by visualised. Hence, technology cannot replace the conventional methods of following the correct information.
It has
been considered
that technology is progressing at a higher rate such as internet is one of the development in the modern era where information can
easily
access and it replaces the conventional method of knowledge where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
in museum. I disagree with above statement owing to certain reasons which would
be discussed
in
further
paragraphs.

First
and foremost, the one of the prominent reason behind this to provide inaccurate knowledge regarding culture and other prospects. This is due to the fact, introduced of myriad social websites on Internet where published by fake
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
high chances of riots in between nations whilst save knowledge in museums is the best option to grasp immediately by
Possible spelling mistake. 'visualised' is British English.
visualised
.
Hence
, technology cannot replace the conventional methods of following the correct information.

IELTS essay In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. nowadays information is freely available on internet hence is no longer need for museum. Towhat extent

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