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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? GnQg
Smoking is a terrible behavior that could clearly have brutal consequences on health of humanbeing, but it is still in use. The problem is visible in young people, indeed, every year many adolescents start to smoke for various reasons like being included in a group of peers or for fell older. Even if smoking is bed seen from the community a young person could see this gesture every day made by a parent or made by his idol in a movie. However the movenet of smoking is considered fascinant and that could be a cause of the adoprion of this habit. Starting from that last sentence it is possible to find a way to reduce the charm that follow the act of smoke. Indeed, dividing smoke from his typical associeted values like ribellion, freedom and indipendece would be possible to reduce the number of new smokers in the society. Decresing the number of new adopters would be a good accivement insted of trying of stop people who have already that vice. It is a metterr of fact that laws who increase the cost of sigarettes do not stop people who smoke. To summarise people start to smoke when their young than it is important to fight all the great values that the adolescent associate to the act of smoke. Instead of minimizing all this values the interest on smoke will decrease fast.
Smoking is a terrible behavior that could
clearly
have brutal consequences on health of
humanbeing
,
but
it is
still
in
use
.

The problem is visible in young
people
,
indeed
, every year
many
adolescents
start
to
smoke
for various reasons like
being included
in a group of peers or for fell older. Even if smoking
is bed
seen
from the community a young person could
see
this gesture every day made by a parent or made by his idol in a movie.
However
the
movenet
of smoking
is considered
fascinant
and that could be a cause of the
adoprion
of this habit.

Starting from that last sentence it is possible to find a way to
reduce
the charm that follow the act of
smoke
.
Indeed
, dividing
smoke
from his typical
associeted
values like
ribellion
, freedom and
indipendece
would be possible to
reduce
the number of new smokers in the society.
Decresing
the number of new adopters would be a
good
accivement
insted
of trying of
stop
people
who have already that vice. It is a
metterr
of fact that laws who increase the cost of
sigarettes
do not
stop
people
who smoke.

To
summarise
people
start
to
smoke
when their
young
than it is
important
to fight all the great values that the adolescent associate to the act of
smoke
.
Instead
of minimizing all this values the interest on
smoke
will decrease
fast
.
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IELTS essay The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

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