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In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing? v.2

In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing? v. 2
Historical architectures emblem the cultural heritage of a society and serve as a source of attraction and inspiration for the dwellers and tourists. The uniqueness of buildings in urban areas is gradually replaced by standard construction stencils and cities all over the globe are becoming identical. This essay will analyse some reasons for this convergence and will provide an opinion on this practice. With the advent of modern equipment, machinery and following similar standards of construction, metropolitan reveal a great deal of similarities in the architecture of buildings. This is primarily due to the increased land price where builders find it more economical to erect a building than to construct one unit housing scheme. Another reason is to provide inhabitants with the similar lifestyle. For instance, multipurpose shopping malls in Karachi and Lahore have similar structure featuring parking space, food courts, and ticket vending machines and so on. Moreover, governments are adopting similar planning and construction footprints to ensure all housing schemes, multipurpose complex, offices and so on are developed on modern layouts to save the environment from pollution, protect natives from furies of mother nature and so on. However, these modern practices come up with their own challenges can be rated good or bad for cities. Laudable arguments are that tourist feels homely, and people have same services and lifestyle. On the other hand, these advancements are damaging the cultural heritage and iconic features of a city which stands out in the world and are taking away its pride and inimitability. To conclude, modern construction practices have resulted in marvels and revamped the metropolitans. In my opinion, it is a good thing, but proper measures should be taken by the government to preserve the historic architecture and sights of a city.
Historical architectures emblem the cultural heritage of a society and serve as a source of attraction and inspiration for the dwellers and tourists. The uniqueness of buildings in urban areas is
gradually
replaced by standard
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construction
stencils and
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cities
all over the globe are becoming identical. This essay will
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analyse
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some
reasons for this convergence and will provide an opinion on this practice.

With the advent of
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modern
equipment, machinery and following
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similar
standards of
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construction
, metropolitan reveal a great deal of similarities in the architecture of buildings. This is
primarily
due to the increased land price where builders find it more economical to erect a building than to construct one unit housing scheme. Another reason is to provide inhabitants with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
similar
lifestyle.
For instance
, multipurpose shopping malls in Karachi and Lahore have
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similar
structure featuring parking space, food courts, and ticket vending machines and
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so
on.
Moreover
,
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governments
are adopting
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similar
planning and
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construction
footprints to ensure all housing schemes, multipurpose complex, offices and
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so
on
are developed
on
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modern
layouts to save the environment from pollution, protect natives from furies of mother nature and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on.

However
, these
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modern
practices
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come
up with their
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own
challenges can
be rated
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good
or
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bad
for
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cities
. Laudable arguments are that tourist feels homely, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have same services and lifestyle.
On the other hand
, these advancements are damaging the cultural heritage and iconic features of a city which stands out in the world and are taking away its pride and
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inimitability
.

To conclude
,
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modern
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construction
practices have resulted in marvels and revamped the metropolitans. In my opinion, it is a
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good
thing,
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but
proper measures should
be taken
by the
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government
to preserve the historic architecture and sights of a city.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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