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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. p3qa
These days, people are preferring images over written texts for communication. While some believe that the classical form of communication, i. e, Newspapers, letters, etc. , can not be replaced by anything, I strongly believe that photographs have become an important way of communication. Pictures tend to attract readers. A person who may not be interested in reading the written text can get attracted to an image easily. For example, advertisements on hoardings use attractive images to seek attention of the viewers. Had there been no images, the impact of commercials would be very less. All it needs is a creative team which creates or chooses perfect image in the right context. Moreover, a message delivered in a film becomes more memorable in people's mind than a text message. A novel, on the other hand, delivers the same message but not everyone enjoys reading lengthy novels. For instance, a movie, along with delivering a message, entertains people which is an important factor in learning. In this way, learning can be made enjoyable and easy, especially in the case of children. A child can remember a picture of apple easier than the text "APPLE". In conclusion, the art of learning lies in enjoying it. Furthermore, pictorial communication saves time. To sum up, images play an important role in the communication. As discussed above, pictures help attracting readers and viewers and delivering a message in a way that is fun to the receivers is possible through filmography which is the reason photographs have become a strong way of communication these days.
These days,
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people
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are preferring
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images
over written
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texts
for
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communication
. While
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some
believe that the classical form of
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communication
, i. e, Newspapers, letters, etc.
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,
can not
be replaced
by anything, I
strongly
believe that photographs have become an
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important
way of communication.

Pictures tend to attract readers. A person who may not
be interested
in reading the written
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text
can
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get
attracted to an
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image
easily
.
For example
, advertisements on hoardings
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use
attractive
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images
to seek attention of the viewers. Had there been no
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images
, the impact of commercials would be
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very
less. All it needs is a creative team which creates or chooses perfect
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image
in the right context.

Moreover
, a
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message
delivered in a film becomes more memorable in
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people
's mind than a
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text
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message
. A novel,
on the other hand
, delivers the same
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message
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but
not everyone enjoys reading lengthy novels.
For instance
, a movie, along with delivering a
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message
, entertains
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people
which is an
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important
factor in learning. In this way, learning can
be made
enjoyable and easy,
especially
in the case of children. A child can remember a picture of apple easier than the
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text
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
APPLE
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
.
In conclusion
, the art of learning lies in enjoying it.
Furthermore
, pictorial
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communication
saves time.

To sum up,
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images
play an
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important
role in the
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communication
. As discussed above, pictures
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to attract" or "attract".
attracting
readers and viewers and delivering a
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message
in a way
that is
fun to the receivers is possible through filmography which is the reason photographs have become a strong way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
these days.
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
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