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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. awq5m
Nowadays/ These days, communication through visuals diagrams such as movies or photos is gaining its importance than writing. I completely agree with the statement that peoples are showing interest in images rather than words in communication for several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in this essay. The primary reason for believing that why these images are becoming popular in communication is because they do not have a language barrier. In other words, to communicate through writing, it is definite that both the reader and writer should know the language. Whereas communication through visuals does not require a language to understand. A particularly good example here is the recent booklet released by the Indian government on covid 19 precautions in which all the pages are printed with cartoon images rather than using a particular language could be problematic for a multilingual country like India. Therefore, it is easy to say why this communication through images is gaining popularity. Secondly, it is also possible to say that communicating through simple image is a far better way to convey messages instead of writing many words. To explain further, with a simple image we can express a hundred of word message. For instance, a description of the village environment requires a lot of words to explain but with the help of an image, we can present all details that can be easily understood and do not need a language to understand. So, many people are now looking into this visual image platform to express their views rather than writing a lengthy word message. To conclude, many people are of opinion that traditional communication through writing in words has been replaced by images which I completely agree with since messages through images do not have a language barrier and convey length messages in a single image.
Nowadays/ These days,
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communication
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visuals diagrams such as movies or photos is gaining its importance than
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writing
. I completely
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agree
with the statement that peoples are showing interest in
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images
rather
than words in
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communication
for several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in this essay.

The primary reason for believing that why these
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images
are becoming popular in
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communication
is
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because
they do not have a
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language
barrier.
In other words
, to communicate
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through
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writing
, it is
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definite
that both the reader and writer should know the
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language
.
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Whereas
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communication
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through
visuals does not require a
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language
to understand. A
particularly
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good
example here is the recent booklet released by the Indian
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government
on
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
precautions in which all the pages
are printed
with cartoon
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images
rather
than using a particular
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language
could be problematic for a multilingual country like India.
Therefore
, it is easy to say why this
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communication
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through
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images
is gaining popularity.

Secondly
, it is
also
possible to say that communicating
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through
simple
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image
is a far better way to convey
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messages
instead
of
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writing
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many
words. To
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explain
further
, with a simple
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image
we can express a hundred of
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word
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message
.
For instance
, a description of the village environment requires
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a lot of
words to
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explain
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with the
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help
of an
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image
, we can present all
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details
that can be
easily
understood and do not need a
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language
to understand.
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,
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many
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people
are
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now
looking into this visual
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image
platform to express their views
rather
than
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writing
a lengthy
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word
message.

To conclude
,
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many
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people
are of opinion that traditional
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communication
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through
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writing
in words has
been replaced
by
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images
which I completely
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agree
with since
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messages
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images
do not have a
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language
barrier and convey length
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messages
in a single
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image
.
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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