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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v.9

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 9
In today's world, images in the form of photographs, films and pictures are used everywhere as a means of communicating with the public. I certainly agree that such images have become a very powerful means of communication and they are used in many different sectors to influence, inform and entertain the public. The media, for example, use images to give detailed information and immediate impact to their news coverage. Similarly, advertising industries constantly use images to influence, persuade and make people identify with what they see. The powerful attraction of images is also evident in the entertainment industry and even with the growth in mobile phones that can send photos as part of a regular personal 'conversation'. However, while it is evident that the image has certainly become a very powerful way of communicating, that it not to say that it has become more powerful than either the written or spoken word. Images can be interpreted in a range of different ways, and because of this they are rarely used alone. Captions, headlines and written explanations or spoken commentaries almost always accompany the use of images, whether they are used in advertising or the media. Used alone, the message of a picture can be notoriously misleading, and is less effective as a result. In conclusion, therefore, I only partly agree with the statement. While it is true that images can send very powerful messages, they are only really effective as a means of communication when used together with either the written or spoken word.
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sectors to influence, inform and entertain the public.

The media,
for example
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images
to give detailed information and immediate impact to their news coverage.
Similarly
, advertising industries
constantly
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use
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images
to influence, persuade and
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make
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people
identify with what they
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see
. The
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powerful
attraction of
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images
is
also
evident in the entertainment industry and even with the growth in mobile phones that can
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photos as part of a regular personal 'conversation'.

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, while it is evident that the
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has
certainly
become a
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very
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powerful
way of communicating, that it not to say that it has become more
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powerful
than either the written or spoken word.
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Images
can
be interpreted
in a range of
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different
ways, and
because of this
they are rarely
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used
alone. Captions, headlines and written explanations or spoken commentaries almost always accompany the
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use
of
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images
, whether they are
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used
in advertising or the media.
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Used
alone, the message of a picture can be
notoriously
misleading, and is less effective
as a result
.

In conclusion
,
therefore
, I
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only
partly
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agree
with the statement. While it is true that
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can
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send
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very
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powerful
messages, they are
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only
really
effective as a means of communication when
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used
together with either the written or spoken word.
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8Mistakes

IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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