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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.2

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 2
In the modern society, communicating with advanced technology such as image has replaced with communicating with verbal form. I personally agree with this phenomenon that photo and film are a more expressive way to communicate than written word with some reasons, which I will explain below. First and foremost, it would seem that the written word cannot be avoided to communicate the information or to share the knowledge. Firstly, the written form may able to be the evidence of formal reference and agreement in many sectors such as academic and business. If it is used, written communication can become the future reference. Furthermore, the written communication, such as letter, may be more polite to communicate something with relation and supervisor at the office. However, we should consider that that visual communication would be the more effective way for many kinds of people, particularly illiterate. This demonstrates that illiterate would be easier to understand the information that is presented visually owing to graphs, diagrams, and pictures complex information, figures and data. The second probable benefit of the image is related to time used for communication. Photo and film would assist to prevent the wastage of time since written communication takes quite a lot of time to exchange knowledge and information. The last possible advantage is that the image may be more interesting for many people than the written. The reason often given is that the image has many colors and forms to express its meaning. In summary it is logical to conclude that the visual communication, such the image, offer the effective way to communicate between people (especially illiterate), the reduction of time consuming, and also the fascinating method to exchange the information. This is provided that we use the written word to communicate each other, when we are in formal situation.
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image
has replaced with communicating with verbal form. I
personally
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agree
with this phenomenon that photo and film are a more expressive way to
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communicate
than
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written
word with
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some
reasons, which I will
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explain
below.

First
and foremost, it would seem that the
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written
word cannot
be avoided
to
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communicate
the
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information
or to share the knowledge.
Firstly
, the
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written
form
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may able
to be the evidence of formal reference and agreement in
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many
sectors such as academic and business. If it is
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used
,
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written
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communication
can become the future reference.
Furthermore
, the
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written
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communication
, such as letter, may be more polite to
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communicate
something with relation and supervisor at the office.

However
, we should consider that that visual
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communication
would be the more effective way for
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many
kinds of
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people
,
particularly
illiterate. This demonstrates that illiterate would be easier to understand the
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information
that
is presented
visually
owing to graphs, diagrams, and pictures complex
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information
, figures and data. The second probable benefit of the
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image
is related
to
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time
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used
for
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communication
. Photo and film would assist to
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prevent
the wastage of
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time
since
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written
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communication
takes quite
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a lot of
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time
to exchange knowledge and
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information
. The last possible advantage is that the
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image
may be more interesting for
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many
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people
than the
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written
. The reason
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often
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given
is that the
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image
has
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many
colors and forms to express its meaning.

In
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summary it
is logical
to conclude
that the visual
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communication
, such the
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image
, offer the effective way to
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communicate
between
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people
(
especially
illiterate), the reduction of
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time consuming
, and
also
the fascinating method to exchange the
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information
. This
is provided
that we
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use
the
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written
word to
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communicate
each other, when we are in formal situation.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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