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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.8

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 8
There is no doubt that these days pictures are influencing our lives a lot, especially with the smart devices that are equipped with high resolution camera, however, the question: Are images more powerful than words? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints, while, I tend to believe that an effective photo has better impact that a full report. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that we cannot use pictures all the time as it is not a common way of communication and getting in touch with others. Furthermore, not everyone can handle the expensive cameras and also film makers cannot have a full film done totally by photos without words. For instance, pencils and pens are the cheapest tools in order to spread a message because it is affordable by everyone. On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact photos are more effective than words because they can express feelings and emotions. Moreover, taking pictures and choosing suitable light and location is a skill that can be invested in anyone regardless of the age. One good illustration here is the pictures kept from the second world war. They are considered as a fortune to keep memories alive and this could not be applicable by words. Several photos won prizes either during wars, celebrations or disasters. In conclusion, as we have seen there is no easy answer to this question, however, in my opinion, photos stay alive for a long time more than words, especially in the previous decades.
There is no doubt that these days
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pictures
are influencing our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
a lot,
especially
with the smart devices that
are equipped
with high resolution camera,
however
, the question: Are images more powerful than words? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints, while, I tend to believe that an effective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photo
has better impact that a full report.

On one side of the argument, there are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who argue that we cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
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pictures
all the time as it is not a common way of communication and getting in touch with others.
Furthermore
, not everyone can handle the expensive cameras and
also
film makers cannot have a full film done
totally
by
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photos
without words.
For instance
, pencils and pens are the cheapest tools in order to spread a message
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because
it is affordable by everyone.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is
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often
argued that in fact
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photos
are more effective than words
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they can express feelings and emotions.
Moreover
, taking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
and choosing suitable light and location is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
that can
be invested
in anyone regardless of the age. One
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
illustration here is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
from the second world war. They
are considered
as a fortune to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
memories alive and this could not be applicable by words. Several
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photos
won prizes either during wars, celebrations or disasters.

In conclusion
, as we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
there is no easy answer to this question,
however
, in my opinion,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
photos
stay alive for a long time more than words,
especially
in the previous decades.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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