Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In the modern era, it is possible to shop, work and communication with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others.it is positive or negative development.

In the modern era, it is possible to shop, work and communication with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others. it is positive or negative development. 0GLn
Thesedays, internet has made it is possible to shop, work and communication with the help of internet without any direct interaction with other ones. Although, there are number of benefits for shopping and work such as save time yet it is also bad impact on communication. Among district factor the main factor is why it is a positive development of shopping and work the first is diversity of choice and save time for customer. There is a wide range of goods available online and people can easily purchase product from different sallers on just single tab their mobile phones at comfort zone. along with this people can easily obtain knowledge about the product and checking the reviews. Thus, it is help to how to use as well as save their time which waste in traveling when they are going for shopping. Similarly, internet has a play a crucial role in work(business) because it is a provider number of opportunity for young ones as well as a boost economy of country, for example, the main the modern way the work is completed in just a few hours and also making of files on their laptop as well as computer than in traditional way most of the employees Made files by written hand work. hence, it is help to done their work in just few hours. However, the main factor is why it is nagetive for communication. Most of the people are use technical gagets on daily basis life. with the help of internet they are comunicate with their peers and dears. through many kind of social platforms such as Facebook, hike, Instagram and so forth. but some time. People have make fake account on those platforms. Because fake people can easily play their emotions as well as haking their real account. According to serve. Last on decades, the thousands of people leave their accounts on platform because of haking their account by unknown person. Thus, the communication on internet is not safe for individuals. To conclude, although shopping and work almost depend on internet and also check the reviews about product and gaining the knowledge about company but communication on internet harmful impact on their personal life.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Thesedays
, internet has made it is possible to shop,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
of internet without any direct interaction with other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
. Although, there are number of benefits for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
such as save
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
yet
it is
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
impact on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
. Among district factor the main factor is why it is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
the
first
is diversity of choice and save
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for customer. There is a wide range of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
available online and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
product from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
Possible spelling mistake found.
sallers
on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
single tab their mobile phones at comfort zone.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
along
with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
easily
obtain knowledge about the product and checking the reviews.
Thus
, it is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
to how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as
The word "save" is a verb. Did you mean the adjective "safe"?
save
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
which waste in traveling when they are going for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
.
Similarly
, internet has a play a crucial role in work(business)
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is a provider number of opportunity for young
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as a boost economy of country,
for example
, the main the modern way the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
is completed
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a few hours and
also
making of files on their laptop as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as computer than in traditional way most of the employees Made files by written hand
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
hence
, it is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
to done their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
few hours.
However
, the main factor is why it is
Possible spelling mistake found.
nagetive
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
. Most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
technical
Possible spelling mistake found.
gagets
on daily basis life.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
with
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
of internet they are
Possible spelling mistake found.
comunicate
with their peers and dears.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
through
Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".
many kind
of social platforms such as Facebook, hike, Instagram and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
forth.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
account
on those platforms.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
easily
play their emotions as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
as
Possible spelling mistake found.
haking
their real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
account
. According to serve. Last on decades, the thousands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accounts
on platform
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
haking
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
account
by unknown person.
Thus
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
on internet is not safe for individuals.
To conclude
, although
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
almost depend on internet and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the reviews about product and gaining the knowledge about
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
on internet harmful impact on their personal life.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In the modern era, it is possible to shop, work and communication with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others. it is positive or negative development.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
366 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts