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In the globalisation era, environment has become a serious issue for every person but according to some people, individuals are unable to preserve it.

In the globalisation era, environment has become a serious issue for every person but according to some people, individuals are unable to preserve it. EpkQ3
In the globalisation era, environment has become a serious issue for every person but according to some people, individuals are unable to preserve it. Hence they believe, government or large companies take some steps to protect it. I do not endorse with this statement, my supporting points will be discussed in this easy. At the outset, there are enormous point that, how individuals can protect environment. First and foremost is carpooling or using public transportation. If people stating sharing vehicles with their neighbour or using public transport system more and more, then it cause less pollution in the city as well as less automobiles run in the city. Due to this, traffic conjunction or level of air or noise pollution will reduce in the surrounding. Not only this but also save the natural resources like petrol, coal, diesel and so on which are non- renewable resources. It take thousand of years to renew again. Furthermore, people should recycle their domestic waste. For example, if they decompose their kitchen waste properly then it produce organic compost which is very beneficial for the plant growths. Not even this, they should use handmade bags rather than plastic bags because plastic bags not easily decompose or its take million years in decomposition process. So, this small steps are very helpful for environment protection. However, higher authorities or big companies both play an curial role to save natural. For instance, government should implement some strict rules for controlling pollution level. Ministry put limitation on industries waste or setup many project to control waste like waste management project and big factories provides funds to the government to help in this project. To conclude, although government need to make various rule and regulation for environment protection, I personal believe that individuals play an important role in it. Their small steps, improve environment conditions.
In the
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globalisation
era,
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environment
has become a serious issue for every person
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but
according to
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some
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people
, individuals are unable to preserve it.
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Hence
they believe,
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government
or large
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companies
take
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some
steps to protect it. I do not endorse with this statement, my supporting points will
be discussed
in this easy.

At the outset, there are enormous point that, how individuals can protect
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environment
.
First
and foremost is carpooling or using public transportation. If
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people
stating sharing vehicles with their
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neighbour
or using public transport system more and more, then it
Did you mean "causes"?
cause
less pollution in the city
as well
as
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less
automobiles run in the city. Due to this, traffic conjunction or level of air or noise pollution will
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reduce
in the surrounding. Not
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only
this
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but
also
save the natural resources like petrol, coal, diesel and
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so
on which are non- renewable resources. It
Did you mean "takes"?
take
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thousand
of years to renew again.

Furthermore
,
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people
should recycle their domestic
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waste
.
For example
, if they decompose their kitchen
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waste
properly
then it
Did you mean "produces"?
produce
organic compost which is
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very
beneficial for the plant growths. Not even this, they should
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use
handmade bags
rather
than plastic bags
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because
plastic bags not
easily
decompose or its take
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million
years in decomposition process.
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So
, this
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small
steps are
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very
helpful for
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environment
protection.
However
, higher authorities or
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big
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companies
both play
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an
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curial
role to save natural.
For instance
,
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government
should implement
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some
strict
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rules
for controlling pollution level. Ministry put limitation on industries
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waste
or setup
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many project
to control
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waste
like
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waste
management project and
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big
factories provides funds to the
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government
to
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help
in this project.

To conclude
, although
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government
need to
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make
various
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rule
and regulation for
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environment
protection,
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I personal
believe that individuals play an
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important
role in it. Their
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small
steps,
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improve
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environment
conditions.
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IELTS essay In the globalisation era, environment has become a serious issue for every person but according to some people, individuals are unable to preserve it.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
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