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learning should be made at an early age rather than at secondary schools.

learning should be made at an early age rather than at secondary schools. jdGBL
Learning at an early stage is considered to be the easiest for any individuals. They can cope up easily to any new situations. It is also believed by many experts that teaching of any foreign language must be done at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Children at a young age have a sharp mind and they can grasp the concepts in a faster way. Due to this fact, they are a better learner. Hence, the advantages are numerous comparing to the disadvantages of learning a foreign language. It helps to develop the communication skills in them and, later, becomes an excellent speaker. They are expose to the foreign culture as well. And if further, they planned to pursue their higher studies, it will be exclusively benefitting. While considering the students in the secondary school, they would find it tougher to learn a new language because it would be seen as a huge burden for them keeping in mind about the vast syllabus. It would prove to be time consuming for them as their learning skills gets weak because of the dependence on technologies. Talking about the education system in India, the syllabus comprises of many books which not only burden the students but also create tension amongst them. Therefore, excluding the subjects which are not included in syllabus is the best option for them. In conclusion, I would suggest that learning should be made at an early stage as the mind is ready to tackle the unknown and wonder for new opportunities.
Learning
at an early stage
is considered
to be the easiest for any individuals. They can cope up
easily
to any new situations. It is
also
believed by
many
experts that teaching of any foreign language
must
be done
at primary schools
rather
than secondary schools.

Children at a young age have a sharp
mind and
they can grasp the concepts in a faster way. Due to this fact, they are a better learner.
Hence
, the advantages are numerous comparing to the disadvantages of
learning
a foreign language. It
helps
to develop the communication
skills
in them and, later, becomes an excellent speaker. They are
expose
to the foreign culture
as well
. And if
further
, they planned to pursue their higher studies, it will be exclusively
benefitting
.

While considering the students in the secondary school, they would find it tougher to learn a new language
because
it would be
seen
as a huge burden for them keeping in mind about the vast syllabus. It would prove to be
time consuming
for them as their
learning
skills
gets
weak
because
of the dependence on technologies. Talking about the education system in India, the syllabus
comprises of
many
books which not
only
burden the students
but
also
create tension amongst them.
Therefore
, excluding the subjects which are not included in syllabus is the best option for them.

In conclusion
, I would suggest that
learning
should
be made
at an early stage as the mind is ready to tackle the unknown and wonder for new opportunities.
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IELTS essay learning should be made at an early age rather than at secondary schools.

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