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In the future technology will be the most important part of our education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future technology will be the most important part of our education. NMQlb
In modern life, technologies have transformed the methods of teaching. As the role of technology in education has been highlighted for the past 20 years, it will certainly be an important part of the future as well. Technology will bring a lot of benefits to the classroom, such as enabling students to learn at their own pace, the flexibility and adaptability to differentiated learning, students depending on their ability and the amount of time that they are willing to devote to their learning effort. In conclusion, with regard to the personalization of education through technology, I agree that technology will be an important part in the future.
In modern life,
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technologies
have transformed the methods of teaching. As the role of
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technology
in education has
been highlighted
for the past 20 years, it will
certainly
be an
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important
part of the future
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Technology will bring
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a lot of
benefits to the classroom, such as enabling students to learn at their
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own
pace, the flexibility and adaptability to differentiated learning, students depending on their ability and the amount of time that they are willing to devote to their learning effort.

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, with regard to the personalization of education through
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technology
, I
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agree
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technology
will be an
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part in the future.
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IELTS essay In the future technology will be the most important part of our education.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
107 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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