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In the future, people will stop buying printed newspapers or books, and switch to free and affordable online versions.

In the future, people will stop buying printed newspapers or books, and switch to free and affordable online versions. e3wMx
Technology is growing by leaps and bounds, and as a result majority of the things are transitioning to the virtual world. In the future, people will stop buying printed newspapers or books, and switch to free and affordable online versions. In my opinion, this is bound to happen considering the ease to read and dedicated devices which are being rolled out. Reading books and articles without paying is a boon. Not only will reading be more accessible to every human, but it will cultivate a culture of good literary habits. With the rising tech advancements, more and more people have their hands on internet devices, which exposes them to the world of e-books. In the USA, for instance, people's busy schedule forces them to opt for daily newspapers that are available on their phones, which is not just convenient while taking public transport, but is half the price of its printed version. People who travel often cannot purchase journals or newspapers at every destination, which is when online annual subscriptions come into the picture. As time passes by, a significant number of civilians will glance through the literature on online platforms to get rid of boredom and stay updated with local news and articles irrespective of their location, thereby naturally saving money and improving their diction. An added benefit of making the move to read online is that it is environmentally friendly. People who are conscious about the environment are gradually cancelling their offline subscriptions, which saves paper and is one step towards the digital era. Furthermore, early copies of books are being made available to fans across the globe, which would otherwise be time-consuming. Some devices are exclusively meant for reading. For example, Amazon's Kindle is in great demand by voracious readers because it offers heavy discounts on most books and makes it easier to highlight the desired content. These reasons act as deal-breakers and are steadily decreasing the demand for printed copies. In conclusion, I firmly believe that reading online will be the common norm as it is economically and environmentally friendly. With disruption in the technology industry, reading online books and newspapers is a no-brainer.
Technology is growing by leaps and bounds, and
as a result
majority of the things are transitioning to the virtual world. In the future,
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people
will
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stop
buying printed
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newspapers
or
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books
, and switch to free and affordable
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online
versions. In my opinion, this
is bound
to happen considering the
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ease
to read and dedicated devices which are
being rolled
out.

Reading
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books
and articles without paying is a boon. Not
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only
will
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reading
be more accessible to every human,
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but
it will cultivate a culture of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
literary habits. With the rising tech advancements, more and more
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people
have their hands on internet devices, which exposes them to the world of e-books. In the USA,
for instance
,
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people
's busy schedule forces them to opt for daily
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newspapers
that are available on their phones, which is not
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just
convenient while taking public transport,
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but
is half the price of its printed version.
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People
who travel
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often
cannot
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purchase
journals or
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newspapers
at every destination, which is when
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online
annual subscriptions
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come
into the picture. As time passes by, a significant number of civilians will glance through the literature on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
platforms to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
rid of boredom and stay updated with local news and articles irrespective of their location, thereby
naturally
saving money and improving their diction.

An
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added
benefit of making the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to read
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online
is that it is
environmentally
friendly.
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People
who are conscious about the environment are
gradually
cancelling their offline subscriptions, which saves paper and is one step towards the digital era.
Furthermore
, early copies of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are
being made
available to fans across the globe, which would
otherwise
be time-consuming.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
devices are exclusively meant for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
.
For example
, Amazon's Kindle is in great demand by voracious readers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it offers heavy discounts on most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it easier to highlight the desired content. These reasons act as deal-breakers and are
steadily
decreasing the demand for printed copies.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
will be the common norm as it is
economically
and
environmentally
friendly. With disruption in the technology industry,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
is a no-brainer.
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IELTS essay In the future, people will stop buying printed newspapers or books, and switch to free and affordable online versions.

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