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XII. Write a short story begin: “ One day I stayed at home alone.” about 120 words

XII. Write a short story begin: “ One day I stayed at home alone. ” about 120 words JK3r5

One day I stayed at home alone. It was hot day and I was in my room wathched TV. Suddenly, I heard noises outside, I felt nevours because the house was too quite for me to scare. Next, I heard who tried to unlock and the footstep sound. At this time, I sweated a lot. But just a moment I decided to opened the door and I saw a rob then I took my phone and called my parents came back home. When my parents came back, I called to the police and said "My house had a rob and he tried to find our money. Luckily, my parents and the police came to our home very quickly and the police catched the rob. And our house didn't property loss. THE END

One day I stayed at home alone. It was hot Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).day, and
day and
 I was in my room Possible spelling mistake found.watched
wathched
 TV. Suddenly
, I heard noises outside, I felt Possible spelling mistake found.devours
nevours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 was Did you mean "to quite"?to quite
too quite
 for me to scare.

Next
, I heard who tried to unlock and the footstep sound. At this time, I sweated a lot. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a moment I decided Did you mean "to open"?to open
to opened
 the door and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'rob' is correct. If 'rob' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a rob
 then I took my phone and called my parents came back home. When my parents came back, I called to the police and said Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 had a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).rob, and
rob and
 he tried to find our money.

Luckily, my parents and the police came to our home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
quickly
 and the police Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "caught", the past tense form of the verb 'catch'?caughtcatchesmatchedwatchedcatcherhatched
catched
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'rob' is correct. If 'rob' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the rob
. And our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 didn't property loss.

THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
END