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in the future people go to shopping for entertainment not to shop.Do you agree or disagree?

in the future people go to shopping for entertainment not to shop. ledRJ

Going to the shopping for entertainment or purchase is becoming controversial topic in many societies. Do numerous people spend their time by shopping for only pleasure or buying anything they need? In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument. Firstly, shopping online has hastily facilities, on the contrary going to the mall is more enjoyable activity for people who want to spend their leisure time by purchasing at malls with their friends or family members. Furthermore, at the mall center you can try on clothes or get advice on products from shop assistans which is the best option can be found nowhere. Due to the fact, you can have a wide range of choice to choose what you want during the shopping. What is more, there are restaurants to eat, bowling alleys to enjoy, cinemas to have fun and other facilities. For instance, when we meet our friends we choose such kind of mall centre because of its facilities. Shop and entertainment is under one roof while we purchase things, we have a lunch there. I strongly believe that in the future most people go to shopping mall for entertainment than purchase. However, there will be some whose aim is only shopping.

Going to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 for entertainment or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
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many
 societies. Do numerous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spend their time by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 pleasure or buying anything they need? In this essay, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.

Firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 online has hastily
 facilities, on the contrary
 going to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 is more enjoyable activity for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who want to spend their leisure time by purchasing at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
malls
 with their friends or family members. Furthermore
, at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
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get
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assistans
 which is the best option can be found
 nowhere.

Due to the fact, you can have a wide range of choice to choose what you want during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
. What is more
, there are restaurants to eat, bowling alleys to enjoy, cinemas to have fun and other facilities. For instance
, when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 our friends we choose such kind of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its facilities. Shop and entertainment is under one roof while we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 things, we When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "have lunch".have lunch
have a lunch
 there.

I strongly
 believe that in the future most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshopping centerplazamarketshopping mall
mall
 for entertainment than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
. However
, there will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 whose aim is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
. 