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in the future people believe that there will be no more printed newspaper

in the future people believe that there will be no more printed newspaper NVWog
People believe that in the future they will tend to read books in digital media platforms instead of buying conventional ones. It is because the online books or newspaper are free and easy to access. Personally, I do agree that there will be a big disruption of printed books in this digital era. However, there will always be a segmented community who preserve reading activity through a conventional way by reading and writing in the printed paper. In this digital transformation era, we could not be defensive to response any rapid technology penetration in our daily life. This idea is based on the literatures that shown show a massive transformation from printed to online. First, it will make a book to be more inclusive compared to physical book, considering there are many people who could not have an adequate access to get the premium book or newspaper. The high-end research publications and books with high quality material could only be reached by few well-educated people in middle high income. On the other hand, many people in middle – low income would find it hard to access. By providing books on digital platform, it will potentially reach wider people without defining their personal or social background. Second, reading online newspaper and books would benefit people to keep them mobile in more efficient ways. The books could be handy enough to read whenever they are such as in the public transport or in the mountain while hiking. On the other hand, / Nevertheless, I also believe that there will always a place for printed book or newspaper. Especially for a scholar or elderly who makes the reading activity as their personal ritual or culture. For elderly, reading a newspaper in the morning accompanied by breakfast is being their daily routine that will be hard to be replaced by the digital platform which might potentially hurt their eyes. Moreover, there will be a scholar community that eager to preserve the conventional literature reading activity as their sacred moment that could develop their cognitive ability better than reading online. For some people, book also become a collection or hobbies, they could treat it well, especially for rare collections. They will have/ give/provide a special treatment to make the condition better/ their collections are well groomed. It usually happens in the library. At the end, I strongly believe/ conclude/regard that whatever the reading platform that might be more popular in the future, reading culture should be preserved and developed, because it could benefit for human development to get wider experiences, perspective and minds.
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believe that in the future they will tend to read
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books
in digital media
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platforms
instead
of buying conventional ones. It is
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because
the
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online
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books
or
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newspaper
are free and easy to access.
Personally
, I do
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agree
that there will be a
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big
disruption of
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printed
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books
in this digital era.
However
, there will always be a segmented community who preserve
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reading
activity through a conventional way by
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reading
and writing in the
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printed
paper.

In this digital transformation era, we could not be defensive to response any rapid technology penetration in our daily life. This
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idea
is based
on the literatures that shown
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show
a massive transformation from
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printed
to
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online
.
First
, it will
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make
a
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book
to be more inclusive compared to physical
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book
, considering there are
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many
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people
who could not have an adequate access to
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get
the premium
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book
or
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newspaper
. The high-
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end
research publications and
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books
with high quality material could
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only
be reached
by few well-educated
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people
in middle high income.
On the other hand
,
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many
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people
in middle
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low income would find it
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hard
to access. By providing
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books
on digital
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platform
, it will
potentially
reach wider
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people
without defining their personal or social background. Second,
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reading
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online
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newspaper
and
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books
would benefit
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people
to
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keep
them mobile in more efficient ways. The
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books
could be handy
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enough
to read whenever they are such as in the public transport or in the mountain while hiking.

On the other hand
, /
Nevertheless
, I
also
believe that there will always a place for
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printed
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book
or
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newspaper
.
Especially
for a scholar or elderly who
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makes
the
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reading
activity as their personal ritual or culture. For elderly,
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reading
a
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newspaper
in the morning accompanied by breakfast is being their daily routine that will be
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hard
to
be replaced
by the digital
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platform
which might
potentially
hurt their eyes.
Moreover
, there will be a scholar community that eager to preserve the conventional literature
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reading
activity as their sacred moment that could develop their cognitive ability better than
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reading
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online
. For
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some
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people
,
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book
also
become a collection or hobbies, they could treat it well,
especially
for rare collections. They will have/ give/provide a special treatment to
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make
the condition better/ their collections are well groomed. It
usually
happens in the library.

At the
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end
, I
strongly
believe/ conclude/regard that whatever the
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reading
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platform
that might be more popular in the future,
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reading
culture should
be preserved
and developed,
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because
it could benefit for human development to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
wider experiences, perspective and minds.
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IELTS essay in the future people believe that there will be no more printed newspaper

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
428 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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