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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. with this statement. wlWE
There will be a situation in the near future in which none of the people will buy printed newspapers or books as all items will be accessible through online mode. However, I disagree with the above statement and also partially agree with the statement. First of all, everyone can’t afford tablets, PCs, Laptops to search and read the papers or books because of the increase in the price of these items day-by-day. Even though they bought them, all of them can’t know the process of viewing them and switching between the pages. For example, a middle-class family or a poor family cannot buy electronics which makes them prefer buying printed newspapers or books. Secondly, the printed newspapers or books are portable so that you can carry them easily wherever you want and whenever you desire to take them. For instance, let us take a scenario in which you know the process to read them, and then you do not have a charge in that device which makes you unable to read it. But, those people, who can understand and read online, can take this as an advantage and get them at no cost. Also, they can visualize the information in an attractive manner, which makes the Youth and teenagers make it a habit. In conclusion, we can understand that in the coming days, people will not buy the printed newspapers or books due to the availability of them online. But there are also some people who still want to experience those in offline ways for their convenience.
There will be a situation in the near future in which none of the
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people
will
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buy
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printed
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newspapers
or
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books
as all items will be accessible through online mode.
However
, I disagree with the above statement and
also
partially
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agree
with the statement.

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First of all
, everyone can’t afford tablets, PCs, Laptops to search and
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read
the papers or
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books
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because
of the increase in the price of these items day-by-day.
Even though
they
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bought
them, all of them can’t know the process of viewing them and switching between the pages.
For example
, a middle-
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class
family or a poor family cannot
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buy
electronics which
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makes
them prefer buying
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printed
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newspapers
or books.

Secondly
, the
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printed
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newspapers
or
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books
are portable
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so
that you can carry them
easily
wherever you want and whenever you desire to take them.
For instance
,
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let
us take a scenario in which you know the process to
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read
them, and then you do not have a charge in that device which
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makes
you unable to
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read
it.

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But
, those
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people
, who can understand and
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read
online, can take this as an advantage and
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get
them at no cost.
Also
, they can visualize the information
Consider replacing "in an attractive manner" with the adverb for "attractive"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an attractive manner
, which
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makes
the Youth and
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teenagers
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make
it a habit.

In conclusion
, we can understand that in the coming days,
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people
will not
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buy
the
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printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
or
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books
due to the availability of them online.
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But
there are
also
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some
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people
who
still
want to experience those in offline ways for their convenience.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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