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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? NJd2
The popularity of physical newspapers and books is in steep decline, nearing irrelevance. In my opinion, although select segments of the population still value books, the move towards free online media is inevitable. The argument against this is that certain individuals continue to pay for print versions. These tend to be older people and only applies to the most well-known books and newspapers. For example, The New York Times still generates sizeable revenue from subscriptions and is one of the only magazines in the United States currently publishing a daily, physical edition. Moreover, hard copies of books are still popular. The vast majority of middle-aged and older people relish the texture and character of actual books and lack the technological know-how to download E-Books. Even many younger people prefer reading paperbacks and hardcovers to reduce eye strain. Nonetheless, someday nearly everyone will read solely online. The clearest evidence for this can be seen in the number of publishers resigned to discontinue printing such as The Boston Globe, The Atlantic, and The Independent. Those still in print have seen circulation drop precipitously as individuals access the same news for free, more conveniently on their mobile devices. This same trend is occurring slowly with E-Books due to the rise of Amazon’s online platforms. Companies charging for online subscriptions have found their readership is trending towards obsolescence as competitors are willing to post free content and earn profits through targeted advertising. These are entrenched habits for young people and it is only a matter of time until print media disappears entirely. In conclusion, a rapid decline in publishing cannot be halted as reading habits have changed irrevocably. This means websites will have to become as reliable and responsible as newspapers.
The popularity of physical newspapers and
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books
is in steep decline, nearing irrelevance. In my opinion, although select segments of the population
still
value
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books
, the
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move
towards free
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online
media is inevitable.

The argument against this is that certain individuals continue to pay for print versions. These tend to be older
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people
and
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only
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applies to
the most well-known
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books
and newspapers.
For example
, The New York Times
still
generates sizeable revenue from subscriptions and is one of the
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only
magazines in the United States
currently
publishing a daily, physical edition.
Moreover
,
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hard
copies of
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books
are
still
popular. The vast majority of middle-aged and older
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people
relish the texture and character of actual
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books
and lack the technological know-how to download E-Books. Even
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many
younger
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people
prefer reading paperbacks and hardcovers to
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reduce
eye strain.

Nonetheless, someday
nearly
everyone will read
solely
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online
. The clearest evidence for this can be
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seen
in the number of publishers resigned to discontinue printing such as The Boston Globe, The Atlantic, and The Independent. Those
still
in print have
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seen
circulation drop
precipitously
as individuals access the same news for free, more
conveniently
on their mobile devices. This same trend is occurring
slowly
with E-Books due to the rise of Amazon’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
platforms.
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Companies
charging for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
subscriptions have found their readership is trending towards obsolescence as competitors are willing to post free content and earn profits through targeted advertising. These
are entrenched
habits for young
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people
and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a matter of time until print media disappears
entirely
.

In conclusion
, a rapid decline in publishing cannot
be halted
as reading habits have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
irrevocably
. This means websites will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
become as reliable and responsible as newspapers.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
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