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In the digital century, therea are a lot of viewpoint supposed that there is not enough time to do a job or not enough free time to do their hobbies. Others compare that time equals money. I personally aggree with that way of thinking.

In the digital century, therea are a lot of viewpoint supposed that there is not enough time to do a job or not enough free time to do their hobbies. Others compare that time equals money. I personally aggree with that way of thinking. n1aKn
In the digital century, therea are a lot of viewpoint supposed that there is not enough time to do a job or not enough free time to do their hobbies. Others compare that time equals money. I personally aggree with that way of thinking. First of all, with time you can make money to earn, However, with money, no one can purchase time. For instance, there is a say that “time is gold”, but no one told that gold is time. People usually reminiscent of the past because of the time has passed is really meaningful to them. Then, the time if we use it in the meaning of the economic, in means the efficiency of the time that an employee used in a job. The more efficiency of time be used, the more salary that they earn. In contrast, their are also factors that can influence on the job such as health condition, mentality, and so on. In conclusion, nowadays, there are plenty of young people who don't appreciate their time so, they say that their is not enough time for time to live. However, if you know how to use your time effectively, you can earn a wealthy life.
In the digital century,
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a lot of viewpoint
supposed that there is not
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enough
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time
to do a job or not
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enough
free
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time
to do their hobbies. Others compare that
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time
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equals
money. I
personally
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aggree
with that way of thinking.

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First of all
, with
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time
you can
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make
money to earn,
However
, with money, no one can
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purchase
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time
.
For instance
, there is a say that
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“time
is gold”,
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no one
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told
that gold is
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time
.
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usually
reminiscent of the past
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because
of the
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time
has passed is
really
meaningful to them.

Then, the
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time
if we
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use
it in the meaning of the economic, in means the efficiency of the
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time
that an employee
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used
in a job. The more efficiency of
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time
be
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used
, the more salary that they earn.
In contrast
,
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are
also
factors that can influence on the job such as health condition, mentality, and
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so
on.

In conclusion
, nowadays, there are
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plenty
of young
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people
who don't appreciate their
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time
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so
, they say that
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their
is not
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enough
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time
for
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time
to
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live
.
However
, if you know how to
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use
your
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time
effectively
, you can earn a wealthy life.
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IELTS essay In the digital century, therea are a lot of viewpoint supposed that there is not enough time to do a job or not enough free time to do their hobbies. Others compare that time equals money. I personally aggree with that way of thinking.

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