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In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs.

In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs. x2p91
Not only do they struggle with the language barrie, but also they do not spend quality time with their friends and relatives and which feel homesick. In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs. In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs. In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs.
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that doing a job in forging they
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merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more
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effects than
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on family
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that doing a job in forging they
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Did you mean "a more career"?
more a career
opportunity.
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Therefore
they need to
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leave
their
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many
merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more
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negative
effects than
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positive
on family
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life
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IELTS essay In the current time, many people think that doing a job in forging they get more a career opportunity. Therefore they need to leave their loves once. There are many merits and demerits of this working scenario. In my opinion, it has more negative effects than positive on family life and personal life, which will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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206 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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