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In the contrary, especially in the current circumstances there are numerous online platforms such as instagram, you tube, facebook, etc are booming. These social media sites not only showcase ones' talents but also give an opportunity to earn and acquire fame. I think anyone could utilise this trends and easily create enough money. For instance, Ranbir Allahabadia, who is a renowned celebrity, and his whole career started from youtube and he is now a great influencer to young generations.

In the contrary, especially in the current circumstances there are numerous online platforms such as instagram, you tube, facebook, etc are booming. These social media sites not only showcase ones' talents but also give an opportunity to earn and acquire fame. I think anyone could utilise this trends and easily create enough money. For instance, Ranbir Allahabadia, who is a renowned celebrity, and his whole career started from youtube and he is now a great influencer to young generations. NVLaW
In the contrary, especially in the current circumstances there are numerous online platforms such as instagram, you tube, facebook, etc are booming. These social media sites not only showcase ones' talents but also give an opportunity to earn and acquire fame. I think anyone could utilise this trends and easily create enough money. For instance, Ranbir Allahabadia, who is a renowned celebrity, and his whole career started from youtube and he is now a great influencer to young generations.
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you tube
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youtube and
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IELTS essay In the contrary, especially in the current circumstances there are numerous online platforms such as instagram, you tube, facebook, etc are booming. These social media sites not only showcase ones' talents but also give an opportunity to earn and acquire fame. I think anyone could utilise this trends and easily create enough money. For instance, Ranbir Allahabadia, who is a renowned celebrity, and his whole career started from youtube and he is now a great influencer to young generations.

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