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describe your hometown alittle?

describe your hometown alittle? JL5Wk

well, first of all, I could start off by saying that I come from Bac Ninh, Viet Nam and I have lived their all my life, although at the moment I'm studying in another city- Hanoi. you know, I suppose I should begin by highlighting the fact that it's absolutely tiny city in my country so population might be quite few. - another point which I could add is that Bac ninh is famous for ancient heritages where you can find so many antique pagodas as well as temples in you know.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWell
well
, This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
, I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 off by saying that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 from Possible spelling mistake found.BackBBCBCBadBarBan
Bac
Possible spelling mistake found.NineNinthNinaNighINHNIH
Ninh
, Possible spelling mistake found.ViewDietVainVieVetVied
Viet
 Nam and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 their all my life, although at the moment I'm studying in another city- Hanoi.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
 know, I suppose I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 by highlighting the fact that it's absolutely
 tiny city in my country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 population might be quite few.

Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
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 another point which I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 is that Possible spelling mistake found.BackBBCBCBadBarBan
Bac
Possible spelling mistake found.nineninthNinanighINHNIH
ninh
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for ancient heritages where you can find This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 antique pagodas as well
 as temples in you know. 