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In the contemporary era, science is considered as a part in everyone's life because it gives the knowledge, which is related to all around the world .As per said notion,In today's era, most of the students choose other subjects instead of science in the universities across the universe. This essay will enlighten what are the reason of this scenario and will provide underlining viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs. The primary factor is considered as, majority of learners don't prefer to adopt science stream due to lack of interest in it. Moreover, students choose other subject for study such as economic, arts and many more. Also, according to some people Employment opportunity in this field is limited and extremely competitive. Secondly, study in this subject is more difficult because numericals are lengthy and words are not easy and very hard to learn it. To demonstrate, a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that, around 40% of candidates are interested to opt sc

In the contemporary era, science is considered as a part in everyone's life because it gives the knowledge, which is related to all around the world. As per said notion, In today's era, most of the students choose other subjects instead of science in the universities across the universe. This essay will enlighten what are the reason of this scenario and will provide underlining viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs. The primary factor is considered as, majority of learners don't prefer to adopt science stream due to lack of interest in it. Moreover, students choose other subject for study such as economic, arts and many more. Also, according to some people Employment opportunity in this field is limited and extremely competitive. Secondly, study in this subject is more difficult because numericals are lengthy and words are not easy and very hard to learn it. To demonstrate, a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that, around 40% of candidates are interested to opt sc pweD
In the contemporary era, science is considered as a part in everyone's life because it gives the knowledge, which is related to all around the world. As per said notion, In today's era, most of the students choose other subjects instead of science in the universities across the universe. This essay will enlighten what are the reason of this scenario and will provide underlining viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs. The primary factor is considered as, majority of learners don't prefer to adopt science stream due to lack of interest in it. Moreover, students choose other subject for study such as economic, arts and many more. Also, according to some people Employment opportunity in this field is limited and extremely competitive. Secondly, study in this subject is more difficult because numericals are lengthy and words are not easy and very hard to learn it. To demonstrate, a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that, around 40% of candidates are interested to opt science subject instead of rest of the learners, in many regions. The second scenario behind this notion is that, this may also impact on the community. Like, if there is no admission in science course, there will be a scarcity of human resources in this field. Further, there would be fewer people in the subject of technology, which will result in less number of inventions. As a result, this could impact the futuristic development of the mankind. For instance, if there is no anyone interest in science, then there is a deficiency of doctors and surgeons which could create an imbalance in the society. To recapitulate, this course requires a lot of hard work to get better result, so that's why students may not choose this field and it may also affect on the society in some ways.
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IELTS essay In the contemporary era, science is considered as a part in everyone's life because it gives the knowledge, which is related to all around the world. As per said notion, In today's era, most of the students choose other subjects instead of science in the universities across the universe. This essay will enlighten what are the reason of this scenario and will provide underlining viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs. The primary factor is considered as, majority of learners don't prefer to adopt science stream due to lack of interest in it. Moreover, students choose other subject for study such as economic, arts and many more. Also, according to some people Employment opportunity in this field is limited and extremely competitive. Secondly, study in this subject is more difficult because numericals are lengthy and words are not easy and very hard to learn it. To demonstrate, a recent survey concluded by "Tribune" newsletter revealed that, around 40% of candidates are interested to opt sc

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