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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport. ywLl

In the salad days of millennium, The society is polarized in two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether tax payers money should spend on construction of new railway tracks for fast transportation between cities or else currency should use to improve on existing public transport. various people have their distinct mind set. The following paragraph would shed lights on both the approaches. i personally support that cash should spend on new railway lines for many of the reasons mentioned below. To commence with the first notion, There are mu raid things to be shared in ts's favor. First and foremost, for building latest railway path for heavy speed trains can be useful for emergency purpose. as a result, any kind of people in certain city can travel to the hospital very quickly if there is any need of medical urgency which is located in another place by super fast trains. For instance, bullet trains. this can be leads to saving a number of the peoples life in this nature. Shifting to the second school of though, income should put on public transport because population is increasing day-by-day, In order to buy new vehicle. consequently, there are lack of travelling sources for now due to growth of population in the star. The profits of government money should invest on producing new vehicles. take, City buses as an example. this thing takes time and especially challenging if inventing new type of buses with latest features for the public travelling. Having discussed the arguments and counter argument, I would like to infer that coins should invest on producing new railway path for super fast trains in between two states. To justify my state of mind, Let's use japan government as an example. Hammering the last nail, I personally fell that new railway tracks should be constructed fore bullet trains with tax payers cash.

In the salad days of millennium, The society is polarized
 in two groups almost equally
 regarding the notion that whether tax payers money should spend on construction of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
tracks
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 transportation between cities or else currency should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 on existing public transport. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterVarious
various
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have their distinct mind set. The following paragraph would shed lights on both the approaches. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
personally
 support that cash should spend on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
 lines for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of the reasons mentioned below.

To commence with the first
 notion, There are mu raid things to be shared
 in ts's favor. First
 and foremost, for building latest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
 path for heavy speed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
 can be useful for emergency purpose. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAs
as
 a result, any kind of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in certain city can travel to the hospital This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
quickly
 if there is any need of medical urgency which is located
 in another place by super This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
. For instance
, bullet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 can be leads to saving a number of the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "peoples'" or "people's"?peoples'people's
peoples
 life in this nature.

Shifting to the second school of though, income should put on public transport This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 population is increasing day-by-day, In order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 vehicle. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterConsequently
consequently
, there are lack of travelling sources for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 due to growth of population in the star. The profits of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 money should invest on producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 vehicles. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTake
take
, City buses as an example. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 thing takes time and especially
 challenging if inventing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 type of buses with A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".the latest
latest
 features for the public travelling.

Having discussed the arguments and counter argument, I would like to infer that coins should invest on producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
 path for super This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
 in between two states. To justify my state of mind, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 japan This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 as an example.

Hammering the last nail, I personally
 fell that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railway
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
tracks
 should be constructed
 fore bullet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
trains
 with tax payers cash. 