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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem? jNOd
In today's advanced world, science and technology have helped improve all aspects of our life even in the field of agriculture. But even with so advancement in agriculture, most people around the globe do not have enough food. This essay will discuss the possible reasons for this and put forward several solutions to reduce this issue. The predominant factors resulting in this problem are inflation and ignorance of government. In other words, everything from clothes to food has become so costly that it is not easy for a big family to earn and spend a lot on food. Additionally, the government does not care about the people who do not have money to buy food. For instance, according to a survey posted in the Times newspaper, fifty-five per cent of people in India sleep empty stomach and the government shelters do not do anything about it. Nevertheless, there are potential solutions that have help in minimizing this problem. Firstly, the government should put a check on the prices of food. Any basic eatable item should not be sold more than the MRP. For example, bread should not be sold for more than ten as it is a basic necessity. Secondly, incharge's of government shelters should prepare enough food for everyone in the shelter. This way nobody sleeps with food. Such steps can reduce the number of people who are still hungry. In conclusion, price-rise and government's carelessness are the reasons why people are still hungry. However, steps by the government can significantly help in reducing this problem.
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today
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helped
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improve
all aspects of our life even in the field of agriculture.
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even with
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advancement in agriculture, most
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people
around the globe do not have
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enough
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food
. This essay will discuss the possible reasons for this and put forward several solutions to
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reduce
this issue.

The predominant factors resulting in this problem are inflation and ignorance of
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government
.
In other words
, everything from clothes to
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food
has become
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so
costly that it is not easy for a
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big
family to earn and spend a lot on
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food
.
Additionally
, the
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government
does not care about the
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people
who do not have money to
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buy
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food
.
For instance
, according to a survey posted in the Times newspaper, fifty-five per cent of
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people
in India sleep empty stomach and the
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government
shelters do not do anything about it.

Nevertheless
, there are potential solutions that have
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help
in minimizing this problem.
Firstly
, the
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government
should put a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
on the prices of
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food
. Any basic eatable item should not
be sold
more than the MRP.
For example
, bread should not
be sold
for more than ten as it is a basic necessity.
Secondly
,
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incharge
's of
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government
shelters should prepare
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enough
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food
for everyone in the shelter. This way nobody sleeps with
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food
. Such steps can
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reduce
the number of
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people
who are
still
hungry.

In conclusion
, price-rise and
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government
's carelessness are the reasons why
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people
are
still
hungry.
However
, steps by the
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government
can
significantly
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help
in reducing this problem.
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IELTS essay In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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