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In some socities stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past

In some socities stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past jRaqX
There are more and more problems, most of them are hard to solve. As a result, these problems cause to that stress is common problem nowadays than the past. Life is full of pressure both periods of time. To begin with, people in modern socities tend to have numerous concerns. Most people try to earn money, while working a lot. Nowadays there are more requirements than the past. In most cases technologies and technological devices are major cause of stress. For instance, using phone everyday without relax or rest, i will definetely affect to people, their mind, working ability. Today stress suffer more than in the past. Looking at the details, there are various causes related with stress, problems at work and also financial situations. Sometimes, for example: uneducated employeers make nervous, financial crisis, problems among friends and family. All of them common events nowadays than the past. However, if people solve any problem with nice result, then, some situations do not make people stress. Furthermore, as a result of war and ages of economic depression, poverty and diseases became the largest problems most people had to face. To conclude, in both generations pressure is common type thing, whether nowadays causes of pressure more common than the past decades.
There are more and more
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problems
, most of them are
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hard
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As a result
, these
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problems
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cause
to that
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stress
is
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common
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problem
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nowadays
than the
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past
. Life is full of pressure both periods of time. To
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begin
with,
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people
in modern
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socities
tend to have numerous concerns. Most
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people
try to earn money, while working a lot.
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Nowadays
there are more requirements than the
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past
.
In most cases
technologies and technological devices are major
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cause
of
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stress
.
For instance
, using phone
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everyday
without relax or rest,
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i
will
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definetely
affect to
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people
, their mind, working ability.
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Today
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stress
suffer more than in the
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past
. Looking at the
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details
, there are various
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causes
related with
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stress
,
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problems
at work and
also
financial situations.
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Sometimes
,
for example
: uneducated
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employeers
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make
nervous, financial crisis,
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problems
among friends and family. All of them
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common
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events
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nowadays
than the
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past
.
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, if
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people
solve any
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problem
with nice result, then,
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some
situations do not
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make
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people
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stress
.
Furthermore
,
as a result
of war and ages of economic depression, poverty and diseases became the largest
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problems
most
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people
had to face.
To conclude
, in both generations pressure is
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common
type thing, whether
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nowadays
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causes
of pressure more
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common
than the
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past
decades.
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IELTS essay In some socities stress is now regarded as a major problem and it is thought that people suffer from more stress than they did in the past

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