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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Genealogy is not a new field and people, especially the noble class, have always been keen on knowing more about the history of their families and ancestors. However, it has recently enjoyed more popularity with many ordinary people, especially in the western world, trying to fill in the gaps in their family trees; a trend I personally disapprove of. One reason why many people are curious about their family history these days is that it is often fun to trace back one’s bloodline and find out if one is related to any famous people. I remember a recent story about how a common supermarket clerk in Nevada was discovered to be a descendant of a British king. Many such descendants live completely ordinary lives, to which a discovery like that can bring many thrills. Additionally, it would definitely help people to realise how their families have changed through the years and therefore, learn a thing or two about the causes of failure and prosperity in different generations. However, many individuals who find themselves related to the nobility tend to consider tiny shares of noble blood as birthright to more respect. They, for instance, often demand seats in public transport when there are more deserving people like pregnant women or the elderly aboard. Apart from that, some of them might overgeneralise the role of factors which have contributed to a former generation’s condition, be it inherited wealth or even bad luck, to their own and disregard the value of their own ideas, efforts and current status. In conclusion, I am not sure if the growing trend towards researching one’s ancestors and family line is actually helping people and the society in general, and believe it must be discouraged.
Genealogy is not a new field and
people
,
especially
the noble
class
, have always

been
keen on knowing more about the history of their
families
and ancestors.

However
, it has recently enjoyed more popularity with
many
ordinary
people
,

especially
in the western world, trying to fill in the gaps in their
family
trees; a trend

I
personally
disapprove of.

One reason why
many
people
are curious about their
family
history these days is

that it is
often
fun to trace back one’s bloodline and find out if one
is related
to any

famous
people
. I remember a recent story about how a common supermarket
clerk


in
Nevada
was discovered
to be a descendant of a British king.
Many
such


descendants
live
completely ordinary
lives
, to which a discovery like that can bring

many
thrills.
Additionally
, it would definitely
help
people
to
realise
how their

families have
changed
through the years and
therefore
, learn a thing or two about

the
causes of failure and prosperity in
different
generations.

However
,
many
individuals who find themselves related to the nobility tend to

consider
tiny shares of noble blood as birthright to more respect. They,
for instance
,

often
demand seats in public transport when there are more deserving
people
like

pregnant
women or the elderly aboard. Apart from that,
some
of them
might


overgeneralise
the role of factors which have contributed to a former generation’s

condition, be it inherited wealth or even
bad
luck, to their
own
and disregard the

value
of their
own
ideas
, efforts and
current
status.

In conclusion
, I am not sure if the growing trend towards researching one’s

ancestors and
family
line is actually helping
people
and the society
in general
, and

believe
it
must
be discouraged
.
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IELTS essay In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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