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Describe your dream house

In today’s world through technology and innovation there are many various types of houses or apartments, therefore almost all people dreams can be realized. I reckon all people would like to live in luxury house which is equipped all futures and amenities So as for me I wouldn’t like to live in enormous house because I believe that cozy and comfortable house it’s better than extremely spacious with a lot of unnecessary space. My dream house should be located in a quiet place with the fresh air, which is not crowded, and has plenty of vegetation. Inside the house there should be 5 or 6 rooms for me and my family, pleasant kitchen and living room with fireplace and armchairs. I would like to have my room on the second floor with beautiful view from the window. Outside the house in my dream there are swimming pool and beautiful garden in the back yard. I hope someday I’ll live in a house like this
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would like to
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in luxury
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which
is equipped
all futures and amenities

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me
I wouldn’t like to
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house
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because
I believe that cozy and comfortable
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it’s better than
extremely
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a lot of
unnecessary space. My dream
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should
be located
in a quiet place with the fresh air, which is not crowded, and has
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plenty
of vegetation. Inside the
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house
there should be 5 or 6 rooms for me and my family, pleasant kitchen and living room with fireplace and armchairs. I would like to have my room on the second floor with
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beautiful
view from the window. Outside the
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house
in my dream there are swimming pool and
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garden in the
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back yard
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I hope someday I’ll
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IELTS essay Describe your dream house

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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