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“In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? ” v.1

“In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? ” v. 1
In a few countries the state maintenances social transportation as the main in the transportation system, and it does not support to use their own cars. This essay states that the benefits of using public shipment far overweigh its drawbacks because it decreases traffic jams on the roads of the cities. This essay will discuss why public transportation as the main benefit of the cities, followed by an analysis of the major drawback, which has restrictions on movement. One of the principal advantages of using public transit is the possibility to protect the environment of cities from pollution. In other words, people in towns could use ecological transports such as trolleybuses, trams, solar-powered buses, instead of their car filled with oil or gas. Public transportation is often believed to improve the urban ecological environment. For example, having conducted research among towns in Europe that use public shipping, scientists have revealed that pollution in these cities decreased by 15% than other towns. The main disadvantage associated with using public shipping that it should not move to shortcut ways, and it has run in limit speed. This is because it should drive to follow directions according to the instructions, and it travels with low speed on roads. Rarely do people realize the consequences of the high speed on driveways. For example, according to research residences of these countries where majority residence accepted social transport, they were not satisfied with 27% of their choice due to slow movement compared with car owners. In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced the benefits of using public transit takes precedence over its drawbacks because of public transportation provide ecological safety of urban environment and limitation of relocation.
In a few countries the state maintenances social
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transportation
as the main in the
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transportation
system, and it does not support to
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use
their
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own
cars. This essay states that the benefits of using
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public
shipment far
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overweigh
its drawbacks
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because
it decreases traffic jams on the roads of the
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cities
. This essay will discuss why
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public
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transportation
as the main benefit of the
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cities
, followed by an analysis of the major drawback, which has restrictions on movement.

One of the principal advantages of using
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public
transit is the possibility to protect the environment of
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cities
from pollution.
In other words
,
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people
in towns could
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use
ecological transports such as trolleybuses, trams, solar-powered buses,
instead
of their car filled with oil or gas.
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Public
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transportation
is
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often
believed to
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improve
the urban ecological environment.
For example
, having conducted research among towns in Europe that
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use
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public
shipping, scientists have revealed that pollution in these
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cities
decreased by 15% than other towns.

The main disadvantage associated with using
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public
shipping that it should not
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move
to shortcut ways, and it has run in limit speed. This is
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because
it should drive to follow directions according to the instructions, and it travels with low speed on roads. Rarely do
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people
realize the consequences of the high speed on driveways.
For example
, according to research residences of these countries where majority residence
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accepted
social transport, they were not satisfied with 27% of their choice due to slow movement compared with car owners.

In conclusion
, taking into account all written above, I am
firmly
convinced the benefits of using
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public
transit takes precedence over its drawbacks
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because
of
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public
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transportation
provide ecological safety of urban environment and limitation of relocation.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay “In some countries the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation, and discourages private vehicle ownership. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? ” v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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