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In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place? v.3

In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place? v. 3
While some individuals prefer rented accommodation in some countries, others believe that purchasing own house is more beneficial. Although renting houses could include fewer maintenance costs and property taxes, it does not provide the comfort of owning a house. In my opinion, staying in the rented house is invaluable when compared to owning a house despite its positive reasons. The greatest benefit of the rented accommodation is that people need not pay property taxes, mortgage interests and maintenance. This is advantageous for those to keep their expenses under budget. In addition, individuals with higher chance of frequent house shifting based on their job parameters, opt for rented houses. For instance, people who shift to other states or countries on job purposes will not be able to find sufficient time to check their own house needs and on the tenants who may reside in the future. On the other hand, owning a house is having a property for ourselves which can be passed to the next generation and paying taxes or interests is worthwhile. Moreover, rented accommodation does not provide the necessary comfort because one need to explain themselves of their behaviour or the house which landlords ask for. To illustrate, owners suggest few terms and conditions for the people who move in to the house and should therefore abide to the rules which could be frustrating. To conclude, rental accommodation has both benefits and drawbacks in equal proportions. Even though it reduces maintenance and property tax costs, ultimately having comfort, possession and freedom of their own is more vital for an individual.
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some
individuals prefer rented
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accommodation
in
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some
countries, others believe that purchasing
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own
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house
is more beneficial. Although renting
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houses
could include fewer maintenance costs and
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property
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taxes
, it does not provide the comfort of owning a
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house
. In my opinion, staying in the rented
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house
is invaluable when compared to owning a
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house
despite its
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positive
reasons.

The greatest benefit of the rented
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accommodation
is that
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people
need not pay
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property
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taxes
, mortgage interests and maintenance. This is advantageous for those to
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keep
their expenses under budget.
In addition
, individuals with higher chance of frequent
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house
shifting based on their job parameters, opt for rented
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houses
.
For instance
,
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people
who shift to other states or countries on job purposes will not be able to find sufficient time to
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check
their
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own
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house
needs and on the tenants who may reside in the future.

On the other hand
, owning a
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house
is having a
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property
for ourselves which can
be passed
to the
next
generation and paying
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taxes
or interests is worthwhile.
Moreover
, rented
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accommodation
does not provide the necessary comfort
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because
one need to
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explain
themselves of their
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behaviour
or the
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house
which landlords
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ask for
. To illustrate, owners suggest few terms and conditions for the
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people
who
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move
in to the
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house
and should
therefore
abide to the
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rules
which could be frustrating.

To conclude
, rental
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accommodation
has both benefits and drawbacks in equal proportions.
Even though
it
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reduces
maintenance and
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property
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tax
costs,
ultimately
having comfort, possession and freedom of their
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own
is more vital for an individual.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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