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In some countries people believe that they should try to fight with the weather changes while other people believe it is good to live with this condition.discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries people believe that they should try to fight with the weather changes while other people believe it is good to live with this condition. o6k6g
It is irrefutable that there are different kind of weather in our country. However, some native opine that they should try to combat with the weather changes while other folks believe this it is good to live with this condition. This essay will shed light on both the arguments in forthcoming paragraphs and my opinion in the conclusion. On the one hand, there are many reasons to make efforts to fight with climate conditions. In such situation they have to learn to fight with it. To examplify, in sone areas of our country where there is lot of cold or hot. In summer people should wear the normal and loosely clothes while in other season they have to try to make their body warm to safe their body from the winters. As a result, in this way the folks also learn the new challenging activity which will help in their future life. On the other hand, there are also some other arguments that tells that to live with climate changes conditions. First and foremost, learn to alive with conditions is necessary in some conditions. For instance, some youngsters who are searching for the jobs but by luck they are posted to that area where there is very harsh condition. In this case, they are not able to argue with someone to refuse the posting area so they have to move to that place. As a result, due to some family reasons their responsibilities force themselves to go and face that conditions in any case to secure their future as well as their parents. To conclude, although there are many reasons to make efforts to combat with weather situation, i personally believe that people should have to learn to live with any circumstances.
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different
kind of weather in our country.
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some
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native
opine that they should try to combat with the weather
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changes
while
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other
folks believe this it is
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good
to
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live
with this
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condition
. This essay will shed light on both the arguments in forthcoming paragraphs and my opinion in the conclusion. On the one hand, there are
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many
reasons to
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make
efforts to fight with climate conditions. In such situation they
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have to
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learn
to fight with it. To
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examplify
, in
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sone
areas of our country where there is
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lot of
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cold
or hot. In summer
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people
should wear the normal and
loosely
clothes while in
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other
season they
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have to
try to
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make
their body warm to safe their body from the winters.
As a result
, in this way the folks
also
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learn
the new challenging activity which will
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help
in their future life. On the
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other
hand, there are
also
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some
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other
arguments that
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tells
that to
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live
with climate
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changes
conditions.
First
and foremost,
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learn
to alive with conditions is necessary in
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some
conditions.
For instance
,
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some
youngsters who are searching for the jobs
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but
by luck they
are posted
to that area where there is
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very
harsh
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condition
.
In this case
, they are not able to argue with someone to refuse the posting area
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so
they
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have to
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move
to that place.
As a result
, due to
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some
family reasons their responsibilities force themselves to go and face that conditions in any case to secure their future
as well
as their parents.
To conclude
, although there are
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many
reasons to
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make
efforts to combat with weather situation,
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i
personally
believe that
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people
should
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have to
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learn
to
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live
with any circumstances.

IELTS essay In some countries people believe that they should try to fight with the weather changes while other people believe it is good to live with this condition.

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